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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2002-08-03 01:19 AM


I wrote this song thinking of you today Lyra, my prayers are with you as we all send many angels to guide you tonight with love and comfort. God Bless You!

Dawn
By: Noah Eaton
8/2/02

Hello, dear friend, I am here
To offer you a shoulder, release you of all your fears
I know it hurts
Hang in there, I won't let you go
Rest your eyes I will blanket you from the cold
I promise you everything will be better

Look up to the dawn
You are free
Love will always find a way
You will see
Put your hands in mine
In faith and grace we'll fly
Through the tears there's a special light
Sparkling from the tears of your eyes
Love will find a way day and night...

Life is indeed full of twists and turns
Sometimes its unfair, but we only grow stronger
We shine in an instant
He is constantly hugging you as He is with all of us
And I know it's because
He loves you and will never leave you alone

Look up to the dawn
You are free
Love will always find a way
You will see
Put your hands in mine
In faith and grace we'll fly
Through the tears there's a special light
Sparkling from the tears of your eyes
Love will find a way day and night

Wherever there is sorrow
There is always a smile underneath
Wherever there is fear
There will always be mercy
Where there is emptiness
There in front of you lies a rejuvenated life
Where time stands still and feels so phlegmatic
Your heart beats on with strength inside
Rise slowly, rise softly
Rise to the dawn, love is here you see
Rise gently, rise gracefully
A brand new day is dawning for you and me...

Look up to the dawn
You are free
Love will always find a way
You will see
Put your hands in mine
In faith and grace we'll fly
Through the tears there's a special light
Sparkling from the tears of your eyes
Love will find a way day and night...

He can feel you crying
He can feel you crying
Dawn is here for you...


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (08-03-2002 01:20 AM).]

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Samantha G Kennedy
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1 posted 2002-08-03 02:09 AM


Look up to the dawn
You are free
Love will always find a way
You will see
Noah....again you influence with words, and touch with unconditional love

you write beautifully dear friend

Sammie

^i^

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2 posted 2002-08-03 09:05 AM


This is beautiful sweet Noah.
I know Lyra will love it!!
~Hugs~

SmartChick
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3 posted 2002-08-03 09:13 AM


Noah, this is such a beautiful poem for Lyra. I know she will love it. You have the biggest heart.
NewEnglandlazurlu
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4 posted 2002-08-03 10:03 AM


Oh, Noah I'm crying my eyes out. This is exceptionally beautiful. The lines: "... Put your hands in mine
In faith and grace we'll fly...'
are outstanding words. God bless you and your caring heart.

Lyra is going to absolutely adore this.

Hugs, Marti

Neeraja
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5 posted 2002-08-03 01:55 PM


Emotional and comforting... a beautiful poem Noah!!!



Neeraja

Madame Chipmunk
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6 posted 2002-08-03 07:01 PM


Thank you so much for this lovely, comforting and uplifting poem, Noah.
Thanks also for thinking of me and for offering me you hand.
~ hugs from my heart

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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7 posted 2002-08-03 07:55 PM


NOAH~

you have me crying....what a lovely song to sing to our angel Lyra...


Lauren~

The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket
I lean against the wind pretend I am weightless and in this moment I am happy

Gentle Spirit
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8 posted 2002-08-03 08:00 PM


Noah, this is so sweet from your heart.  Lyra will love this.

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}


Corinne
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9 posted 2002-08-03 09:08 PM


A wonderful, inspirational write, Noah!

Cor

catalinamoon
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10 posted 2002-08-03 09:24 PM


Oh Noah, this is so very beautiful.
Hugs to you for writing it, and to Lyra, too.
Sandra

mycafe
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11 posted 2002-08-05 02:15 AM


Let us all sing to the dawn with Lyra! Noah this is beautiful writing!

marie

Keep counting your blessings

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