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Missive To My Knight Errant
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Missive To My Knight Errant |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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Oh, Bring to me thy kisses ever sweet and strew thy roses always at my feet Thou must not steal my joy, nor thrust away No, keepest close to you my love each day. Oh, yet I hear thou whisper in my ear and feel my heart beat stronger as you near for naught shall ever wrest my dream from me tis you and I, as we were meant to be. Oh, break the barricades that hold us back thou art full strong enough to fill this lack with touches that set fires in my soul magical hands, such I have never known. Leave not my knight, slay all dragons for me for every sentiment I find in thee. [This message has been edited by catalinamoon (08-02-2002 11:26 PM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sandra....dear lady, you know that I am a big pushover for Knight/Maid poetry.... I know you know that..... |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
That is so beautiful, Sandra... I was just thinking about how much it reminded me of Barry's poetry...and lo and behold...there is a reply from him. I think you two culd write a lovely duet together.  ~ chipmunk hugsLyra |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
You have no idea how much I love the spell you have weaved with your words!!! Amazing!!! Kristen |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Sandra... If I was a dragon slayer I sure would answer this ad. HA HA I really liked it. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggssssssss) Oh my gosh, I love this, sweet friend, this too reminds me so much of Barry's wonderful classic style, I LOVE IT, may your loving knight come and sweep you off your feet, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Very strong willed .... can feel the determination behind the flow of words. Sounds like a sleeping dragon has awakened, I may have to bring my sword and shield out of the closet!! Excellent!! |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Ooooo ~ Sandra I just love this. Nice job of writing. Hugs, Marti "Even if life is full of thorns, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sandra, You cast a dove with a message of love, enjoyed. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Catalinamoon - a'hhhh, knights written about, loves tales of old, love it.... BC |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Ahhhh my dear I come to thee to take away from tragedy My heart doth hold thee well I shant not let the fear dwell. I come my love, I ride the night I come to thee, I fear not fright I shall be nigh to guard thy sleep Fear not my love, do not thee weep. Love the poem Sandra........Duet accepted ..... I await thee words on silver wings of passion..... [This message has been edited by Magnus (08-03-2002 11:55 AM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Love this Sandra... a keeper for sure..into my library it goes. ~Hugs~ |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sandra, So "Shakesperean" so beautiful of what love still exists in this "not so romantic" age. But "true love" ascends beyond the centuries, and you have captured it all so beautifully.......as always. Love, Elise |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Give me the days of old anytime when it comes to love. You did yourself proud in this piece and it shows not only an understanding of days past but it shows that your poetry is growing. You have made some remarkable achievements since I started reading your works and I am continually impressed at your seemingly desired ambition to grow in your poetic talents. A read very much worth the "click" and one that shall inspire many thoughts as well. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Amen! I love this... as always you and I wish for the same things, and I find myself sighing with your words. Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
I am ready to slay your dragons if your knight is busy. paladin |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
All Knight applications gratefully accepted |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
perfection. . . absolute perfection. . . this just flows from the heart and onto the page. . . wonderful in rhythm and in words. . . yes, there will be applicants. . . I just know it. . .  ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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