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Sweet Wine of Desire
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Sweet Wine of Desire |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise 
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 Sweet wine of desire from kisses so fine Making passionate fires in this heart of mine Such a sweet vintage of delicious afterglow Warm sensations inside me continue to grow Your lips pressed to my lips filled with such ecstasy I am drunk with this wine so make love to me. Tantalizing passion from a wine such as this Total intoxication that comes from your kiss Every kiss thrills me more than the one before So, baby pour out your wine and kiss me once more! Poetry is: Passion, imagination and intellect running together. Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa [This message has been edited by CSKpoet (08-02-2002 10:06 PM).] |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
This is lovely. A glass of wine may be needed right about now. Thank you for this. It's a delight. |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
Thank you kind lady! Yeah, it sounds great to me too! grins.. Cher Poetry is: |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Cher, I love wine poems, they mix so well with love. Sandra |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
woooooooow?? Its just agreat job..U know I really feel it..I live the moment..sooo romantice..I like the way you wrote ur words..Specially the end part (So, baby pour out your wine and kiss me once more!)I like it so much.. I will be waiting to read more..hey by the way Iam new here and I will be glad if u just have alook at what I have written its not very well its amodest one..so plllz I wana know ur opinion.. thanx alot,, secretlife(Easy come,,Easy go) |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
CSKpoet - a'hhhh yes, lips of wine. You write of them well... BC |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
CSKpoet - a'hhhh yes, lips of wine. You write of them well... Darn, I must learn how to do those photo's with the poems... BC |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
Catalinamoon: thanks so much...I know i read one of yours(a sonnet) and was so impressed with the romance and form. I appreciate your feedback on my scribbles. Secretlife: Welcome..I will go seek out your poems and enjoy as well...thanks so much for your very appreciative remarks. Bill: thanks so much for taking time to write 2x in here very kind of you to give me feedback, also. I emailed you to explain the formula for the pics. anyone can email me if they wish to know how. Poetry is: |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
You do the romance thing so well. We just might have to tag you the first lady of romantic verse.  This is a beauty and it doesn't matter what style you write in...it always comes out a treasure. It is nice to find a poet that does so many styles well so I tip my hat to you and your talent as well as your your ability to convey the simple things in life in a manner that makes them seem complex but tangible. Well done indeed. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Beautifuly romantic with perfect graphics. Indeed for the library! Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
Mark : I doubt I could claim that title..I have witnessed far too many wonderful poetess' in pips... I do thank you for the very complimentary comment and acknowledgment of the fact I try to do a diverse collection of poems. I just love the write. ..thanks for taking time to write such a lovely reply Gentle Spirit: I am thankful that you enjoyed this poem abd that you so graciously commented on it  to you both and aloha, Cher Poetry is: Passion, imagination and intellect running together. Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa [This message has been edited by CSKpoet (08-03-2002 10:46 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, mmmmm...made me dream of kissing my sweetheart Joanna again, this is breathtaking, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cheryl, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
big hugs to you Noah and thanks again for your sweet comments.aloha, Cher |
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