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WhiteRose
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somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2002-08-02 08:25 PM



For Allen

How is that you always know
and come rushing to my side
with arms that hold me close
a place for me to hide.

Just when my life gets crazy
and I weep for just a clue
I turn and run for cover
and run smack into you.

You're always there for me
reaching deep into my heart
with words that bring me up
right out of the dark.

I don't know how you do it
always being there for me
you are my life preserver
when I brave the troubled sea.

Whatever it is my love
that makes you draw so near
when I am filled with doubt
or frozen in my fear,

I pray you never change
I need you more than air
for I know in the storms
you'll always be right there.

WhiteRose

Love seduces joy from the heart

© Copyright 2002 Anne Thompson - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-08-02 08:27 PM


Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Paul Wilson
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2 posted 2002-08-03 01:07 AM


Very Touching.
If you have someone in your life like this, you have found true love. Good Luck.

secretlife
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since 2002-07-30
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3 posted 2002-08-03 07:41 AM


You know what great means????? I just love it..u know why coz I live the moment ...its the same situation dear...So I can share u my dear.. I like this part very much(with words that bring me up right out of the dark.) I love it and I feel it..Also I like that (with arms that hold me close a place for me to hide). You explain that very good..
All I can say that I will keep reading more from u...
keep going,,

Secretlife,
(Easy come,, Easy go)



SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
4 posted 2002-08-03 09:05 AM


You are very fortunate to have someone like this in your life.
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
5 posted 2002-08-03 09:23 AM


WhiteRose,
A wonderful write, enjoyed.

WhiteRose
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somebody's dungeon
6 posted 2002-08-03 09:23 AM


Thank you all for your comments. I do have someone like this in my life, but he has his faults. Don't we all? :-) But as for being there when I need him, he always is, and I didn't always deserve his uplifting arms. We've been together now for 14 years and now that he is out on the road driving a truck I miss him like crazy.
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