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Young Love |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Young Love By: Noah Eaton 8/2/02 I dream softly on my pillow Of a special tomorrow waiting to come With me and my sweet Joanna Together as one  I dream of a special silky white wedding And lifting my loves veil before my eyes Kissing my Joanna and holding her hands Crying joyfully as she becomes my future wife I dream of a child we have just years from now It's a girl that me and Joanna name Shakira With beautiful green eyes that resemble Joanna's The day I become the daddy I dream someday to be in euphoria I dream we teach her her first word and her ABC's Being there when she cries and sharing her happiness I dream she walks up to both of us with a sweet sugary smile Saying "I wuv you!" in her sweet young innocent voice with bliss I dream sweet dreams of tomorrow Of beautiful things yet to come for me Smiling in the afterglow of young love A happy future just waiting for me... (Just a cute muse I have every day that I dream to come true! Yay!!! )"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (08-02-2002 08:12 PM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is so cute Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
Wuv it, Noah! yeth i do! dreams are the fuel of passion may you never run out of it! jeff |
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Singing Sparrow Member
since 2002-05-12
Posts 94 |
awwwwww, geez i cant believe this is hugely overlooked, back up to the top now! ***bump***  SS |
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LilTai Member
since 2002-06-08
Posts 189United States |
I love this and you will make such a loving, caring, wonderful husband and father This is perfect!!! |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
She'll be one lucky little girl to have such wonderful parents Rex |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Noah! She's one lucky lady! ~Hugs sidekick~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is so adorable, Noah.... I just know that you will be such a wonderful husband and daddy someday... There is a picture in my mind right now, of you and Joanna surrounded by 3 angelic looking little ones....  ~ hugs and wishes for a bright futureLyra |
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Jason Member
since 2002-07-31
Posts 72Macon, GA |
Noah, I read "Read My Heart..." first, how did I miss this one? This is a very sweet poem, and fun too. I liked the way your mirth comes through in your words. Have fun my Friend, Jason Practiced in the Art of Perception |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Noah,you are going to be the worlds best husband and Daddy. I can't wait to hear about an official plan.. Hugs Sandra |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
What a wonderful dad you will be and a fine husband as well. I love your sweet expressions of innocence and joy! Good for you Noah. Remember this feeling forever and should you need a reminder, frame this and hang it on your wall. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Making me think of that song... They say for every boy and girl there's just one love in this whole world and I know that I have found mine... We will vow to one another there will never be another love for you or for me. Young love... Hoping for good things for you Noah...James |
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