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Samantha G Kennedy
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Kent England

0 posted 2002-08-02 06:00 PM



‘I love you’

I speak to his quietening smile
that fades with the breeze as night falls,
swallowing the day whole.
Savouring the fragrance of dusk
connecting vision beyond my eyes ~
I transfer today, away, from the stars that lead him
and with a candle lighting the way
I creep, departing...
without creating
a
single
sound.
I answer to my waking smile

‘but I love me more’


S-G-K

For those who need to tread away from unhappiness


[This message has been edited by Samantha G Kennedy (08-02-2002 06:02 PM).]

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Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
1 posted 2002-08-02 06:02 PM


Sammie - as you know, one loves ones self first before another can be loved...

BC

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Canada eh.
2 posted 2002-08-02 06:22 PM


Absolutely beautiful Samantha!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-08-02 07:04 PM




(sigh) Oh Sam, this is sooooo beautifully touching, sweet friend, yes, true happiness always begins with YOU, for if you can feel love in yourself you can accomplish any other endeavor! (kiss on cheek) This is beautiful, sweet sister butterfly, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, swet Sam, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (08-02-2002 07:05 PM).]

RSWells
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since 2001-06-17
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4 posted 2002-08-02 09:12 PM


Sound advice sounds so nice.
WhiteRose
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somebody's dungeon
5 posted 2002-08-02 09:39 PM


This is lovely.
Madame Chipmunk
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6 posted 2002-08-02 11:04 PM


Great job on this one Sammie...
I think you get your point across very well, with some first class writing.
~ poetic hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Samantha G Kennedy
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since 2002-07-27
Posts 131
Kent England
7 posted 2002-08-03 02:03 AM


thank you, you are all, so very kind


Sammie

^i^

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