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Phantom Walks The Halls of Blue
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Phantom Walks The Halls of Blue |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Quietly I walk the halls of blue In search of a fair maid or two. Silently I stand in whispered hush hoping to find and bring to blush. Lonely hearts reside in this place. Tinted walls with mirrors and space. Sound of the beat of passion’s call, echoes of love within the hall. Strolling on down to the next door. Wishing to find love to explore. Sensing the ear against the wall. Listen dear hearts, tenderly all. Then to a door left open there. Spying inside silk flowing hair. Might this be one maiden of night Certainly to my eyes a sight. Whispering softly at the breach eloquent words of passion’s speech. Suddenly then a head does turn, causing a heart to thump, to yearn. Join me love as I walk this path to the clear falls of nature’s bath. Take my hand as we stroll along singing a tune, a sensual song. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
This one made me "swoon". It was lovely. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx WhiteRose....what part of Carolina are you from? |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
I heard the step, and shadows dare as my heart leapt, to show my care a whisper'd word, are you still there? I heard the step, and shadows dare. Oh blue walls of Passion, please draw my love's sigh in the breeze and let him know that he may seize, oh blue walls of Passion, please! But lo, the steps now fall away my head is bowed, what can I say? 'tis not our time, nor is it our day... but lo, the steps now fall away... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Magnus~ Just lovely ... I'll try not to  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
an entertaining poem!!! Neeraja |
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Keith Morgan Member
since 2001-10-29
Posts 114Md |
beautifully written! i enjoyed this immensely. thank you for sharing Write from the soul and the words will flow |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
*SWOON* Beautiful Barry....simply beautiful! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Barry - h'mmmm, in search of a fair maid or two. Yes indeed, a swooning poem... BC |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Barry this sounds like one of those hot romance novels  Sandra |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Barry And you wonder why I call you the "King of Romance".......this is why. You certainly made this maiden's heart skip a beat with your beautiful words of love. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Barry, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I think I remember reading this one before when you were inspired by Startime's poems, I am so happy you re-posted this as you truly are a King of Romance! (smiles) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Noah, though similar to others posted in the past... This is original.....but that is OK.... |
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