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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2002-08-02 02:42 PM



In Light Of Day

~*Diana Tindal*~

In light of day
on yawn of dawn
Frolic of words
across moist lawn
Saying will you ink this thrill
in thrust of colors from your quill
Dab of crimson
Dip of gray
All words now in fond array
Canvas glow of rising sun
lit with words on blazing run
Caught by artist in word-display
without that 'thing' I could not say~


*My contribution to you-know-who's thingy*
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WhiteRose
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1 posted 2002-08-02 02:46 PM


Oh and you did it such a delightful way. I enjoyed every E'less word.

[This message has been edited by WhiteRose (08-02-2002 02:46 PM).]

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2 posted 2002-08-02 02:47 PM


Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

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3 posted 2002-08-02 02:51 PM


D'lightful stuff
no E's was 'nuff
for writing such a brilliant gift
giving all a thrilling lift....

wonderful Margie gal.

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (08-02-2002 02:54 PM).]

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4 posted 2002-08-02 02:53 PM


Great Write Marge, I liked alot.

Regards,
Olias.

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5 posted 2002-08-02 03:14 PM



First class!

write with grace, all others lose face;
"Jo was very tall, thin, ... and reminded one of a colt..." LMA

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6 posted 2002-08-02 03:17 PM


Oh this is beautiful! I didn't realize at first you were writing without any E's. That sounds difficult! You did well though. Very nicely done, Marge/Diana.

~sky

You look inside my wild mind
never knowing what you'll find
still I want you all the time
yeah I do
'cause you get me
~Michelle Branch

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7 posted 2002-08-02 03:20 PM


What a warm colourful poem!

Neeraja


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8 posted 2002-08-02 03:41 PM


your contribution to my "thingy" is a song that sings in light. . .

good work. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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9 posted 2002-08-02 03:52 PM


Thanks to all~
It was actually much fun
Took just a bit of ink-of-think~
*HUGS*
~*AliasDianaISMy'Mid'*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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10 posted 2002-08-02 03:58 PM


Yo Margie....another good write....and what thing you talkin' 'bout anyhow?...LOL...and thanks for posting my pic....I still don't know how to do it in my posts...but again, I'm in my 4th year of college taking Atari 101 still.....
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11 posted 2002-08-02 04:07 PM


And, you did it oh so good. But, I had no doubt that you could.
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12 posted 2002-08-02 05:31 PM


Marge,
As always well done.

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13 posted 2002-08-02 06:19 PM


You're too cool and too clever!!!

Signed

ric tru

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14 posted 2002-08-02 06:40 PM


Well done Marge!!!
~Big Hugs sweet poetess~

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15 posted 2002-08-02 06:45 PM


Hello Marge

Wonderfully written from a masterful pen.

Take care.....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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16 posted 2002-08-02 08:30 PM


Marge:  How clever of you!  This was a challenge well met!

Betty Lou Hebert

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17 posted 2002-08-03 09:04 PM


Margie girl darling heart sister again I wanted to reply to this so here I am this is beautiful writing absolutely beautiful, you know I LOVE this one. You are an absolute star when it comes to writing. I love it, utterly adore it perfect poetry.


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

Marge Tindal
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18 posted 2002-08-03 09:18 PM


My Friends~
You are all so special to this lady~
I have fun ... share it ... and you all wrap me in the warmth of your friendship of enjoyment~
What more could this poetess ask for ?
Nothing .... absolutely nothing~
From my heart ... I love you all~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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19 posted 2002-08-03 11:04 PM


Very Excellent. Oh Oh I used some "Thingy's"
Enjoyed it Marge... Paul

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20 posted 2002-08-06 10:42 AM


Outstanding work, Diana. As always. *G*
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21 posted 2002-08-06 10:43 AM


very nice
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22 posted 2002-08-06 10:44 AM


nice words, Marge... could really feel it...

Regards,
sudhir


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23 posted 2002-08-06 10:46 AM


What "thing?"
I love it, you know I do

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Kit McCallum
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24 posted 2002-08-06 10:50 AM


Wonderful challenge to write without the "e's" and you've accomplished it beautifully Marge, much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

(ps ... I used up about 12 of them just responding above, lol)

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25 posted 2002-08-06 10:56 AM


Diana/Marge...
You not only succeeded in writing a poem without e's,  but you have written an absolutely marvelous one at that...
~ hugs and kudos

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Marge Tindal
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26 posted 2002-08-10 01:09 PM


You all know how to pass on a *grin*
This was FUN !
Might do it again~
*Hugs*
~*Diana*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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