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Open Poetry #21

Lady

Street Poet
Member

since 2002-07-07

Posts 82

0 posted 2002-08-02 11:48 AM

Lady,
You are a true work of art/
Your sexyness is just not physical but straight from the heart/
The beautiful smile you have radiates like the bright sun/
My eyes are lock and loaded on you like a sniper`s gun/
Your pretty face make me wanna stare at you for days/
Daydreaming about you has me caught in a daze/
Your sliky smooth skin reminds me of sweet chocolate/
Lady,
Your deep brown eyes hypnotic they are/
I can spot them out of any group of girls from afar/
You are so smart and intelligent/
Anyone who fails to notice your beauty is very negligent/
Your body is perfect in so many ways/
That is your natural beauty pure and unfazed/
When we dance you movements would drive any man crazy/
Your favorite song is "I just wanna luv U" by Jay-Z/
You smell like sweet flowers at their peak/
Damn girl, everything about you is unique/
Your the definition of a true cutie/
We vibing off each other/
As we dance to R. Kelly`s "feelin on ya booty"/
In my eyes your Ms. Perfect/
You have everything I could ever work with/
To me you are more than a dime piece/
Us together forever hopefully, maybe/
In my heart you will always be a true strong black lady/

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

1 posted 2002-08-02 11:49 AM

Street Poet - yes, a most romantic write...

BC

LilTai
Member

since 2002-06-08

Posts 189
United States

2 posted 2002-08-02 12:10 PM

I love the flow of this, it has a steady beat. I like it a lot.

Don't let this lady go, it sounds like you care for her a lot.

Tai

I'm an idealist..I don't know where I'm going, but I'm on my way =)

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