A Coming Of Dawn (Sven's E Challenge)

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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2002-08-02 08:43 AM

Sky lit up
in sunny bright
rising of morn
in glorious day.

Wisping of clouds
winds carry away,
birds of wing
flying in sky,
rainbow colors
vivid in sight.

Day slowly fading
into calm night.
Luna's light
illumination of all,
smiling with knowing
'tis the Good Lord's gift.

Stardust falls from
sky on high,
Goodnight to all,
God is nigh.

Past tonight
a gift of living.

~Again,
a coming of dawn.~

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (08-02-2002 08:46 AM).]

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2002-08-02 08:50 AM

~smiling~

very soft and inviting Donna
hugs
M

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2002-08-02 08:56 AM

Thanks Maureen, appreciate the smiles and visit. Not an E~asy challenge for sure!!

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

3 posted 2002-08-02 09:00 AM

Fantastic job! And, beautiful poem.

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

4 posted 2002-08-02 10:23 AM

This is lovely.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

5 posted 2002-08-02 12:33 PM

Gentle Spirit - very nice with or without the E'ssssss....

BC

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

6 posted 2002-08-02 12:41 PM

Wow!

Said if I only could ...
-KB

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-08-02 12:59 PM

"Past tonight
a gift of living.

~Again,
a coming of dawn.~"

(smiles) Oh Donna, this is such a beautiful message of faith, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! And may the dawn always shower you with His loving light and bless you with lifes sweet gifts, sweet friend, this is beautiful, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiufl heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!

May love and loght always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Bridget Shenachie
Senior Member

since 2002-01-23

Posts 1056
Kansas USA

8 posted 2002-08-02 01:39 PM

Enjoyed your poem. Not an easy challenge.

Shenachie

OLIAS
Senior Member

since 2000-06-20

Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa

9 posted 2002-08-02 01:49 PM

Lovely poem, very refreshing I liked it very much. Thank you for sharing.

Regards,
Olias.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

10 posted 2002-08-02 02:02 PM

Donna, very well done....nice poem for
the challenge...

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

11 posted 2002-08-02 02:04 PM

talk about a hard task
darn.....that's alot to ask
giving my all, I did try
writing with no "E's" in own words of my....

dang, I'm skipping the nExt challEngE.....lol...

{Destiny is not a matter of chance, it is a matter of CHOICE!}

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (08-02-2002 03:02 PM).]

Jason
Member

since 2002-07-31

Posts 72
Macon, GA

12 posted 2002-08-02 02:35 PM

Each and EvEry EvEnt of thE day
said with no EasE? E's?
you'vE donE ExcEptionally wEll
it sEEms to mE.

it was a lovely poem too....
thanks for the read,
Jason

Practiced in the Art of Perception

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

13 posted 2002-08-02 03:38 PM

wow D, you did an amazing job with this. . . it's a song. . . a song to dawn. . .

it's good. . .

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Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

14 posted 2002-08-02 05:31 PM

wow aunt donna, this looks hard, but i'll givE it a try. lol, nicE job on ur poEm hErE.

~Ultimately, we are all dead~Proximo

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

15 posted 2002-08-02 05:37 PM

You are among the amazing, I see, to write so well without an "e"!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

sigheyes
Member

since 2001-04-25

Posts 323
the winds of destiny

16 posted 2002-08-03 09:13 PM

Y' know, your versatility amazes me. This is awesome.

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