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Professor Gloom
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of Depression

0 posted 2002-08-02 08:10 AM


Those fine hairs
Low on the nape of your neck,
Stiff standing
And demanding,
You rub them to lay back down,
Perchancing
A glancing,
What is there that you suspect?
Was it there,
Any where,
Or was it just a strange sound,
A brief scare
Of death come passing around..

Gloom


© Copyright 2002 Aszard Drazlom - All Rights Reserved
Toerag
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Ala bam a
1 posted 2002-08-02 08:12 AM


Good write Gloom....Death, you will know me by my touch....it will be your last!
Professor Gloom
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2 posted 2002-08-02 08:21 AM


Thank you, Toerag,
Pleased you liked it,
I don’t have the lightness of your writing,
I just write about what I know.

Gloom

WhiteRose
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somebody's dungeon
3 posted 2002-08-02 10:55 AM


Gloomy alright. :-) But a nice read anyway. I'm looking over my shoulder now.
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
4 posted 2002-08-06 08:01 PM


I must have overlooked this one..maybe was too hair raising at the time..*s
You do know  how to write the gloom...
hugs
M

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2002-08-06 09:11 PM




Wow, I just love the haunting tone of your words, sweet friend, this is wonderful and stirs with intensity, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Aszard, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

sigheyes
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the winds of destiny
6 posted 2002-08-06 09:43 PM


Your words live up to your name.
S Arthur Grey
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woven by a poet's loom
7 posted 2002-08-06 11:33 PM


You inspire, Gloom.
I've felt that chill breeze . . .

1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
8 posted 2002-08-07 07:38 AM


or life...tickling you on...helen
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
9 posted 2002-08-07 08:25 AM


Professor Gloom
You have captured the silence of aware.

suthern
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10 posted 2002-08-08 10:43 AM


And you've left those fine hairs standing at attention... thanks a lot! LOL

I like this, Professor! *S*

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
11 posted 2002-08-08 10:45 AM



Sometimes people just like
to dance on the grave
of what's to come...

well done, Sir...

Nan
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12 posted 2002-08-08 11:24 AM


You have some Gloomy talent, Professor..
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