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SweetSean18
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since 2002-08-01
Posts 11
California, U.S.A.

0 posted 2002-08-01 10:28 PM


Unexplained Love

What could I do to tell my sacred feeling to you?
As I look into your eyes, I can't seem to talk.
How could I tell you that my crush I have for you is true?
Your blonde-brownish hair seems to leave to wave in the air as you walk.

Keeping my secret for a year can't escape from my lips.
Your quiet voice whispers only a hello.
Why must my feelings become sheltered and zipped?
When I talk to you, my heart tries to be mellow.

Your tired eyes can't seem to reach mine.
When you see me, I don't know what to feel.
Someday I might tell you this before the end of time.
There have been times that I wished my lips weren't sealed.

Why must I be afraid to let them out?
Seeing you, I can't explain why my love for you begins to mount.

Thank you for visiting my poetry.

© Copyright 2002 Sean - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-08-01 10:33 PM


I love this

Cold hands means a warm heart

SilentStarWolf
New Member
since 2002-08-01
Posts 2

2 posted 2002-08-01 10:38 PM


Wow, that's a really nice poem. Keep up the good work. I could picture what you were describing almost.
Love And Light,
SilentStarWolf

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