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Forrest Fantasy |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Whispering winds caress the trees as gentle rain falls from the leaves. An eagle’s cry pierces the dawn, startling the sleep of a young fawn. Whistle shrill echoes round the bend down the rail of steel long and thin. Smoke from the stack billows high as clouds drift across a blue sky. See the meadow of the forest green. Such a picture, peaceful, serene. Dance to the tune of buzzing bees. Whispering winds caress the trees. Hear the call of the waking owl sitting on a tree, solitary scowl. Feel the flow of life giving air fluttering lids, soft flowing hair. See the mountain, majestic, proud in slumber beneath snow capped shroud. Fuel the fire of night for romance. Sing a lover’s tune as two slow dance. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful sounds and images here Barry! Much enjoyed. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh I love this, and the last line wrapped it up perfectly. Sandra |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus, Very romantic, enjoyed the read. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Barry - I look out at the forest and the mountains majestic and then see what you have written. YOu capture it well... BC |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
my goodness...where are you? I wanna come over there! |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
What a fine...rich poem! "Feel the flow of life giving air" My favorite line in this poem! Neeraja |
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Jason Member
since 2002-07-31
Posts 72Macon, GA |
Magnus, Well done, indeed.... Beautiful imagery flows through your words. I enjoyed this, it gave me a new perspective on my rural morning. thanks, Jason Practiced in the Art of Perception |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggsssssss) Oh Barry, this is sooooo beautiful and tranquil, sweet friend, I just love walking through the forest to admire the sounds of Mother Natures melodies, this is breathtaking, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Wonderful images. Mountain air..has that effect. Made me feel right at home..thanks Magnus. Sincerely, Reg |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
See the meadow of the forest green. Such a picture, peaceful, serene. Dance to the tune of buzzing bees. Whispering winds caress the trees. A beautiful word painting, Barry... This sounds like a place I would love to hang out...  ~ hugs from my little underground burrow in the woodsLyra |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
I enjoy nothing more than being outdoors in quiet forests...daydreaming...the sights, smells, and sounds seem so much more distinct. Some lovely images to dwell on here. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Full of pictures...James |
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