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Tears (Haiku) |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA 
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Tears Unstoppable flow Salty paths of fingertips Of soft sorrow cries "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nice Haiku Tara....long time no see... How are you doing? Hope all is well for you... |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Tara~ hugssss big hugssss....hope you are well...  Lauren~ The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Thank you Barry. Things are going... I have my days. I am working at a mobile phone company now... but.. still to poor for an isp..lol. So it is the 10 hours of free internet from netzero... that I have to share. I wish I could be here more often. I'll be back though.. eventually  |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Lauren! You snuck in there on me! lol. Thank you for stopping in.. I hope things are going well for you too  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Tara, I have missed you so so much, is everything alright? I too cried reading this, sweet friend, know I am always here if you need someone to talk to, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tara, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
well done! that last line is deceiving...it looks too long but the syllable count is exact Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
rosepetals25 - you do this well my friend. Hoping you are well... BC |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Nice poem. Glad t' see you back, tara! Said if I only could ... |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
It's good to see you back, Tara. Lovely haiku.  |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
what a sweet haiku! Neeraja |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Nicely worded, Tara. So good to see you here. *hugs* my friend |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Gracefully said, Tara, this is your best haiku so far Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Thank you all for responding. I wish I could be here more, but at moment I can't be. I'm so far behind in reading... Hopefully one day soon I will have more internet time for stopping in. The fact that you all stop in to read what I have to put up here means so much. Hugs. Tara |
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