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catalinamoon
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0 posted 2002-08-01 09:19 PM


My yearly birthday poem for my sweet grandaughter


You are the star for which all evenings wait
the dream of youth which time cannot abate
You are the moon that shines through darkest night
a child of beauty born of all that's right.

You are the only love that does not fade
an innocence such has never been made
You are an angel standing at my side
my love for you will never be denied.

Today you're six and growing oh so fast
I wish these precious years could always last.

© Copyright 2002 Sandra - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-08-01 09:21 PM


Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Sunshine
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2 posted 2002-08-01 09:23 PM



Ah Cat...my just six yesterday granddaughter
is 10 now...
I know, I know...
hold the bubbles fast...

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-08-01 09:24 PM




YAY!!! Oh Sandra, we all wish your sweet Savanna the happiest birthday ever!!! You are such a loving friend and other and I know Savanna will always be blessed to have a wonderful mom like you and all her dreams are bound to come true just like yours! (kiss on cheek) This is a precious timeless gift, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2002-08-01 09:28 PM


Oh Sandra...they are so precious!
Trouble is they grow up so fast...
Lovely birthday write for your granddaughter!
Enjoyed this so much.
~Hugs~

Magnus
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5 posted 2002-08-01 09:30 PM


Sandra,  keep loving her as you do....
I know your feelings well.....I have watched
my two, now 9 and 12 grow from just little
ones....they are all precious and so special.

SweetSean18
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6 posted 2002-08-01 09:45 PM


Hey Sandra! That was a beautiful poem. Great imagery and love the pictures in my head. Keep going with your poetry.

Thank you for visiting my poetry.

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7 posted 2002-08-01 11:33 PM


very beautiful Sandra~....

Happy Birthday Little Savanna


Lauren~

The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket
I lean against the wind pretend I am weightless and in this moment I am happy

Honeybee
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8 posted 2002-08-01 11:37 PM



Happy Birthday Savanna!

A wonderfully, touching poem, Sandra, she is lucky to have a Grandma like you (and a young looking one at that - you go girl!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Bill Charles
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9 posted 2002-08-02 11:29 AM


catalinamoon - very nice gift for a precious little one...

BC

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10 posted 2002-08-02 03:50 PM


a truly wonderful gift from the singer. . . to the song. . .

wonderful Sandra. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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11 posted 2002-08-02 03:54 PM


CatalinaMoon~
*Grandma smiles* from this corner of the world~
Beautiful~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
           noles1@totcon.com                       

Auguste
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12 posted 2002-08-02 06:18 PM


Yes, Sandra, she is a beautiful little one.  Happy birthday to her.
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