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Scar Tissue
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Scar Tissue |
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Samantha G Kennedy Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 131Kent England 
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I scrutinize the day fall in, One enormous overlap of sky, from dark to light- Each angle of my stare takes in the last echo of sweet air My nostrils eat eagerly the shadows of you. ¤ I tow the blazing quarters of my psyche To be placed in silenced reflections of the world, Beckoning the violet searing sensations That shakes the rhythm of my movements flow; ¤ My inner sanctum liquefies the silver sands I walk Each step of affection delivering my dance, And my mind whirls into another dimension of existence Pausing by still waters clarifying ecstasy; ¤ This playground built from cavities of fears Run parallel the ragged memoirs dormant~ furthermore They empty to the two faced moon and spin The higher self of I, shifts the story to move on; ¤ I can’t look back, the words broke the pattern Confronting sacks of tissue to pierce a heart, But I saw the soul’s vague longing At least for just a moment I was strong; ¤ I’ll raise the basic negative, unconsciously- To scale the higher visions of truth, Kissing a forehead goodbye, while shades music Chants within your dreams perpetually, my gift to you, a single scar across my heart. S-G-K© |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesome Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Samantha, a lot of deep thoughts within .. well conceived.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Samantha, I am impressed. Perhaps because of your style and ability but mostly but the flow of your mind. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Yes, yes, we must always treat lifes journies like an onion; we must always learn from our mistakes and continue to shed the skin like a snake until we finally get as close as the truth as we can get where ecstasy and justice rest! (kiss on cheek) This is awesome, sweet sister butterfly, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sam, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
My inner sanctum liquefies the silver sands I walk Each step of affection delivering my dance, And my mind whirls into another dimension of existence Pausing by still waters clarifying ecstasy; This is excellence in verse, Samantha... Please keep up the good work.  ~ chipmunk hugsLyra |
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Samantha G Kennedy Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 131Kent England |
Thank you!! so very much |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Samantha, this is quite intense. You used some very good lines here. Sandra |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Samantha, I too am impressed by this piece, you have some hard-hitting and unique lines here and I feel your words. I look forward to more poetry by you Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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