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Parrot Tongue |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 Parrot Tongue By: Noah Eaton 8/1/02 She walks the white beaches with pearl toes Her hair curses with static and sunshine wherever she goes She murmurs merengue from her sexy parrot tongue Singing Latin serenades from her conga drum lungs She screams like a siren She's much more than just some chicken of the sea She wears white shoulders And she rises from the ocean like Aphrodite Shes goes with the flow She's one with the undertode Watch as she goes with the flow She'll go, she's going, she'll put on a show She's laughs like a flamingo but cries like a dolphin joyfully The sea foam is her pillow wherever she sleeps I am the ocean that cradles her when she's dreaming Like a tuna fleet the sweetness is always fleeting She walks the white beaches with pearl toes Her hair curses with static and sunshine wherever she goes She murmurs merengue from her sexy parrot tongue Singing Latin serenades from her conga drum lungs I stand on the floating dock Eating cajun catfish and watching the tidepulls run amock Watching my love bodydive with seaweed in her hair Swaying her hips gently like the mermaid princess she is so fair Shes goes with the flow She's one with the undertode Watch as she goes with the flow She'll go, she's going, she'll put on a show She walks the white beaches with pearl toes Her hair curses with static and sunshine wherever she goes She murmurs merengue from her sexy parrot tongue Singing Latin serenades from her conga drum lungs "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (08-01-2002 04:30 PM).] |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
This is soft and sweet. I like it very much. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I like the mood of this one Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Samantha G Kennedy Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 131Kent England |
wow! Noah, this is filled with description, a wonderful treat Bravo! Sammie ^ |
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LilTai Member
since 2002-06-08
Posts 189United States |
Ohh Noah! This is BEAUTIFUL sweetheart, I love it!!! Thanks for the uplifting poem on a not so good day  You have noo idea how much I needed this...truly beautiful I love it! You are amazing. Tai |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
Very amazing, Noah. I've totally enjoyed the read. mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
She walks the white beaches with pearl toes ====================== a very cool image there...lovely.."pearl toes" wonderful use of imagery and theme here Noah unique as well. Tell me we belong together |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
swirling soft, like a sea breeze at night around her splayed hair, until first light love larger than an ocean, river or sea for where my love goes, you will always find me Some of your most beautifully structured words, yet, Noah. Truly outstanding poetry that obviously you thought much about. It shows, and it was wonderful! Until tomorrow jeff |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
 Lovely Noah, as all you write is....I never tire... Lauren~ The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket |
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Singing Sparrow Member
since 2002-05-12
Posts 94 |
love it! SS |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Noah - another lovely from your pen... BC |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
How I would love to steal that opening line, noah!  "She walks the white beaches with pearl toes" exquisite, sweet noah. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Oh Noah, there are so many lines in this poem that jump off the page into my heart. Gosh, this is fabulous. I love this: '...She murmurs merengue from her sexy parrot tongue Singing Latin serenades from her conga drum lungs...''' Oolala....hehe Marti |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
You have such a wondeerful way of painting a thought onto these pages Noah! GREAT WRITE!! |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Lush and beautiful, my friend, a mini-vacation for my eyes, thank you! Corinne |
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