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Furie
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since 2002-06-17
Posts 39
Myriad of Unkown Places

0 posted 2002-08-01 03:24 PM


I could be talked into it
By your authoritative voice;
Convinced into believing
Again in the warmth of the sunshine
And the air I breathe.

But all of that is you, anyway,
Is it not?  I should tell you thank you
For the recent gift you sent to me.
So indeed, thank you.  I was glad to hear
The encouragement...and the life reminder.

I would love to accept you in full
And regain and mend the shredded trust.
For even now, I feel myself drifting
As though safe in your arms again.

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WhiteRose
Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon
1 posted 2002-08-01 04:39 PM


I could be talked into it
By your authoritative voice;

Oh what an authoritative voice can do. Enjoyed the poem.

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
2 posted 2002-08-01 04:44 PM


Enjoyed

Cold hands means a warm heart

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