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SlashedsoulHollowman
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0 posted 2002-08-01 12:01 PM




Gazing at the water fall
upon a rock higher than all
All around I feel, I see
this world of colour surrounding me

Yes, men have conquered and men have been
everywhere it seems
Landscapes changed forevermore
like seawater brushing agaist the shores

Clouds of mist obscure these sands of time
that hold the secret ghosts of many crimes
Into the mist, I look, I ponder a little more
as I have done so times before

Yet I watch the rocks turn to sand
as if crumbled by gods invisable hand
I know what fate holds in store
and in time my body will become one with the shore.....
Richy

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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-08-01 03:08 PM


Very much enjoyed this read

Cold hands means a warm heart

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Member Rara Avis
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2 posted 2002-08-01 11:38 PM


Welcome to Passions....I know you will love it here.... I really enjoyed this poem, and look forward to more...


Greeneyes~

The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket
I lean against the wind pretend I am weightless and in this moment I am happy

Samantha G Kennedy
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since 2002-07-27
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Kent England
3 posted 2002-08-02 05:24 AM


Clouds of mist obscure these sands of time
that hold the secret ghosts of many crimes
Into the mist, I look, I ponder a little more
as I have done so times before
a beautiful vision in verse!

Sammie

^i^

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