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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2002-08-01 11:07 AM


it could have been along the coast of oregon
down south where the surf sounds like thunder
where you and he held hands more than before
and you winked at me when I sat behind him

or perhaps when we drove along rincon
and you had lunch before, and I could taste it
on your fingers, you made me guess what it was
in the dressing that made me want more

or was it when the phone rang at 10 am
and we talked about lady luck and cards
and how she won that hand, but you could have,
since you had the cards but didn't play them,

that makes me wonder what you would be like
in the desert with all that sun
and heat, wearing your leather jacket
pretending to be a casino with easy odds

and me pretending to be wealthy
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Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-08-01 11:09 AM


...and we talked about lady luck and cards
and how she won that hand, but you could have,
since you had the cards but didn't play them,

~*~

You've got to know how to hold 'em
and know when to fold 'em...

We've missed you...

Welcome back!


Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2002-08-01 11:14 AM


Dark Stranger
Pretence can be so many things, enjoyed the approach.

Martie
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3 posted 2002-08-01 11:22 AM


DS

Images and imagine...makes me wonder too, how much you get with a quarter in the right slot.

I always enjoy your poetry!

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-08-01 11:28 AM




(smiles) Yep, and I bet the way she makes you feel must feel like much more than a million dollars! (big hugggssssss) This is one lucky streak, sweet friend, you always find that special pot of gold in your talent, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2002-08-01 11:29 AM


ms sunshine...thanks coffee buddy lady, was enjoying the cheatin sharks at aqua calente (new casino in palm springs) and 117 degree heat...but I qualified (yay) for the Pay Good Money to Suffer award.


thanks sir sy, you are a jackpot of enjoyment with your replies


ms martie, thanks little neighbor...I used my trick quarter with the string on it...darn I looked silly on the security videos...


noah, hi amigo and thanks for the howdy back...next time colorado for sure...cripple creek hear I come.


[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (08-01-2002 11:34 AM).]

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2002-08-01 12:22 PM


We have those places here as well...
where you throw the dice..
play the game...
And the only winner is the house.
Should come visit..sometime.
Enjoyed the read...
~slow hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Dark Stranger
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West Coast
7 posted 2002-08-01 12:27 PM


ms enchantress..yes...me thinks there are lots of them...thanks for the read and the invite.  If you hear a harley be sure to wave it just might be me.
Indigo
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8 posted 2002-08-01 12:35 PM


black or red she called
as the wheel spun circles
and her heart tumbled


Indigo

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2002-08-01 12:57 PM


ms indi...
hearts and diamonds
in the dealers hand
and you with decolletage distractions

thanks babe

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