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Life Surrounds, Peace Abounds
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Life Surrounds, Peace Abounds |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Life Surrounds, Peace Abounds  Sounds of life surround a gathering in fellowship. The meeting of unknown, the greeting of new. Children’s laughter fills the air. ~Innocence defined, life divine~ Adults recapturing youth in the sweltering heat of summer. Relief on constant breeze as welcome as a mothers upon her new borns delicate skin, in gentle caress. Here age is not limiting~ race is not an issue~ and religion is not divided~ but united under one creator. Life in its purest form fulfills the needs of those gathered here in this place where life surrounds peace abounds, even the birds don’t mind the heat…. Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. {on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me} [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (08-01-2002 06:35 AM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
As always Donna...SO very beautiful! Even the title is so comforting. Enjoyed thoroughly. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I imagined this gorgeous place reading this and it too eased my mind, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
I love summer, and all the great feelings that it brings with it. You brought them all back full-swing, and I thank you for the memories!! Open the door and let your adventure begin!!! |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
Donna, there's so much beauty in this, and very uplifting too! *hugs* mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Donna, beautiful imagery and a very soothing message....one we all should not forget... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Donna, Well done enjoyed the read. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I really enjoyed this one. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A lovely expression of the peaceful side of life, Donna.  ~ peace and hugsLyra |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
lovely you...lovely this...  Lauren~ The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket |
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Samantha G Kennedy Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 131Kent England |
Life in its purest form fulfills the needs of those gathered oh this is beautiful, a perfect read for my morning...ty! Sammie ^i^ |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Your words give such a peaceful tone, One could almost become lost in the gentle Gloom |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
sooth sayer..the lady your stress is covered here donna can you turn it around now and go inside with your thoghts? soo cooool babe |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Well then, wish I was a bird. I |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
What a lovely image you portray here. Sandra |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thanks to all of you. Monday I had the most delightful pleasure of being in such a lovely place for the entire day. There was such a variety of different people, life styles and religions. I think I learned more in this one day with all of these folks than I have in a very long time. The day was enjoyed, by all and YES it was hot. No one even minded.! Thanks again and peace to poetry land. Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
This title is lullingly peaceful and the twist on the end is delightful. |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
thoughts of being in that one Quiet Place where faith where appreciation where peace has origins and answers. . . Great work, Donna! I mean it! Outstanding! jeff |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
SE thanks very much you are so appreciated. Hugs. Jeff, well I most certainly do believe you! And thanks so much for enjoying my simple offerings on my thoughts of the day. Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. {on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me} [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (08-03-2002 09:42 PM).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Donna There are many places like this, I think..that first have to be found within your own heart to appreciate. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Donna This was so very lovely and was so much enjoyed....beautiful! Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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