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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-08-01 05:01 AM


Final Test

What if love was not enough?
What if there were lots of
other things to factor in?

Things like money and age
differences and the opinions
of family and friends.

Will each external factor
be weighed and put to rest?
Will the heart stand the
pressure of loves final test?

JamesLee
July29
2002

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2002-08-01 06:07 AM


love is never enough...I think someone wrote a book on that...I happen to agree (for the moment anyway)
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2 posted 2002-08-01 07:06 AM


I love your poem, James. But I think the true test of love? is that it knows "no finals"...

smile? now. I gotta go put on a frigging tiarra...

Enchantress
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3 posted 2002-08-01 08:59 AM


Beautiful James...and I do think a lot
of factors are involved...
but true love withstands all.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

WhiteRose
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4 posted 2002-08-01 09:53 AM


I think "true love" is enough. The problem is defining "true love" Enjoyed the poem.
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5 posted 2002-08-01 09:53 AM


enjoy
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6 posted 2002-08-01 11:43 AM




(sigh) There are indeed many obstacles that love is challenged with, but as long as love is true, nothing can stop its magic and warmth! (big hugggssssss) This is touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

LilTai
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7 posted 2002-08-01 03:34 PM


I like this..of course in any relationship there are all those other factors, but if the love is real and true, then it is always enough

   Tai

I'm an idealist..I don't know where I'm going, but I'm on my way =)

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