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the reign of chaos
New Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 6

0 posted 2002-07-31 11:56 PM

As we gaze eye to eye..
I couldn’t possibly look away..
“I love you” I want to cry..
No other words I need to say..

For you I have fallen..
..and yet I still fall deeper..
My heart has been taken..
Your love has never tasted sweeter ..

At night I lay in bed..
I am unable to sleep..
Thoughts of you are in my head..
Memories I will forever keep..

So much love..
And its all yours
So much...you could never dream of
It keeps building more and more..
..
In your eyes you hold my gaze..
In your lips you hold my kiss..
The truth shows clearly through the haze..
When I am alone, it is you whom I miss..

In your tears you hold my comfort..
You know I will always be here..
I will do anything to mend your every hurt..
And hold your hand through all your fears..

For in your heart you have my eternal love..
It’s as true as it is deep..
The most enchanting thing I can think of..
My love I hope you will always keep..

      ........well..im thinken this is my first official poem..i wrote it for the love of my life..her name is jen, most of you know her here as "voicless".  a couple months ago she wrote a poem about a certain someone..and posted it here on this website.  i am that lucky someone.  i fell in love..and now i have finally written a poem for her.  so yeah there it be.

...hun..thank you for being you...

   Love,
         dusty

Voiceless
Senior Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind

1 posted 2002-08-01 12:00 PM

I feel loved!
Great work hun,
and make sure it isn't
the last poem!
Okay?
Love ya!

Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial)

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-08-01 12:59 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I just know Jen loves this so much, this is so sweet of you! Welcome to Passions, sweet Dusty, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! This is a gorgeous dedication of love, sweet friend, may you and Jen have the greatest happiness together! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Dusty, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

the reign of chaos
New Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 6

3 posted 2002-08-01 11:34 PM

lol, ill try to not make it my first/last stand hun, and yeah you should feel loved!  and thanks noah for your support!  that was very kind of you.

  love,
      Dusty

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