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Sunshine
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0 posted 2002-07-31 08:01 PM



Serenity’s Wedding Day

As you see the morning stream
Through slim shadows of your dream
In kind accord before his eyes
Your Wedding Day now realized…

You have channeled, challenged, then
Picked the pieces up again,
Saw that freedom’s price was high
And said to him, “You’re MY guy,

You’ll see me through night and day
Each of us shall have our say
It won’t be easy, we’ve seen worse
But our I Do’s have been rehearsed,

And I shall love you as I do
For through it all, we see true,
Now is the moment, shall it be?
Will you be my Eternity?”

He shall bend over your fine hand
Saying he is yours by God’s command
The wedding day shall swirl to night
And your world will be just right.


~*~

Have a wonderful Wedding Day August 1, Serenity.



© Copyright 2002 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Madame Chipmunk
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1 posted 2002-07-31 08:04 PM


Oh what a lovely wedding poem for our Serenity Blaze....
I wish her tons of luck also...
~ chipmunk hugs to both of you

Lyra

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"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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2 posted 2002-07-31 08:06 PM




YAY!!! Congratulations Karen, and we all wish you and your love a happy marriage and future together forever filled with sunshine and flowers and magic! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet Karilea, this was very thoughtful of you to write such a touching poem to one of our dearest friends of Passions, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2002-07-31 08:21 PM





What is happiness?  It's love.
A dream that's shared by two,
It's a feeling that keeps growing
Whether love is old or new.

Wishing you a day of warmth and beauty
With magic in the air!
A lifetime of love and happiness
For both of you to share.

~ Luv & Hugs, Nancy ~
Martie
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4 posted 2002-07-31 08:41 PM


Karilea

You wrote such a lovely heart thought for this marriage...I wish I had written it..so I'll just say, to Karen and her intended..me too!

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5 posted 2002-07-31 08:53 PM


This is so beautiful and I'm sure they will be honored to have it for their wedding scrapbook.

Hugs, Marti

"Even if life is full of thorns, I still embrace it for I know that in between those thorns, there is a rose worth all the pain."

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6 posted 2002-07-31 09:00 PM


WOWOWOWOWOWOW!!!

tomorrow?? wowowowowow!!!!

ohMY!!! did i say WOWOWOW yet?

WOW!!!!



i'm wowed by the news and
the poem

i wish the sereneOne a life of happiness

wonderful writing karilea

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7 posted 2002-07-31 09:05 PM



A most beautiful write, Karilea!

Congratulations and heart-hugs Karen...I wish you the best as you surely deserve to be happy, respected and loved

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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8 posted 2002-07-31 09:19 PM


Very beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

mycafe
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9 posted 2002-07-31 09:25 PM


Awww Karilea, Serenity would feel so blessed to have a sweet friend like you.   Love this beautiful tribute!

mycafe

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10 posted 2002-07-31 09:26 PM


Now that's what I call going down in a blaze of glory!

Best to ya, serene one!

Nan
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11 posted 2002-07-31 11:14 PM


Congratulations to our most serene one

Corinne
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12 posted 2002-08-01 12:08 PM


A wonderful tribute to a lucky couple!

Cor

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13 posted 2002-08-01 12:15 PM


Awww, wonderful poem, Sunshine. And good luck and happiness to you, Sen! *wink*

Mikey

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14 posted 2002-08-01 12:28 PM


Congratulations, may it last forever!
Krawdad
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15 posted 2002-08-01 01:24 AM


She's really going to do it?

WOW

Hey, K?

CONGRATULATIONS
&
BEST OF LUCK


e


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16 posted 2002-08-01 01:34 AM


I had a few minutes, and I can't tell you how much this means to me. You are all so graciously loving. I thank you much.

Kari? This is just SWEET. And? I'm kind of exhausted and dammit my nails are wet, so I shouldn't be typing--but hadta say thank you.

pssst....who wants to kiss the bride?



And? I guess I should type at least one blush, eh? if only to appease the gods of the obvious...




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17 posted 2002-08-01 01:51 AM


Gonna wear shoes AND gettin' married!!!!!  Shouldn't this be a holiday for us all?  He's a lucky guy, K.  Ya'll have fun.  Otherwise, what's the point?  Don't answer that...lol.

I
I was standing
You were there
Two worlds collided...

INXS

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18 posted 2002-08-01 04:56 AM


Congratulation Serenity...it must be exciting...James
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19 posted 2002-08-01 06:05 AM


I second that motion! Yes, a beautiful day it will be! Congrats!
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20 posted 2002-08-01 07:06 AM


Hey Beautiful..... Congratulations!!!
All the very best to you both

hugs

Maree

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21 posted 2002-08-01 07:09 AM


Wow, the big day's here already??? Congratulations and I hope it's everything you dreamed it would be. Have a wonderful, wonderful day Karen.

You can never win or lose
If you don't
Run the race

Psychedelic Furs - Love My Way

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22 posted 2002-08-01 09:44 AM


        





I know youre going to be a beautiful bride baby...goddess stature for sure    
enjoy your special day...and then dance me twin!!
Me thinks the party will pale Mardi-gras    
Love you KA


[This message has been edited by Janet Marie (08-01-2002 10:32 AM).]

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23 posted 2002-08-01 09:45 AM


You know how I feel Karen. May you find blessings in this union. Smile!!!
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24 posted 2002-08-01 09:51 AM


enjoy
Dark Stranger
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25 posted 2002-08-01 02:30 PM


does this mean I have to move out? (grin) good luck ms serene....and ms sunshine you did her nice here...dug it!!
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26 posted 2002-08-01 02:37 PM


Beautifully said SunShine .....

Best wishes to you Serenity.
And may this one not require pokes in the eyes
(inside joke for those who may not know, I'm not being mean)

Good luck to you!

~Sheri

"The things that come to those that wait may be the things
left by those who got there first"



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27 posted 2002-08-01 04:26 PM


may your hands be heldfast to life
and may your hearts be heldfast to being
love shines where light cannot
and being voices what mouths cannot say. . .

congratulations. . . you know that I wish all the best my wonderful friend. . .

---------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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28 posted 2002-08-01 05:03 PM


That was a wonderful poem!

*God has a purpose for sunshine and rain*

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29 posted 2002-08-01 07:17 PM


So when/where/why/how do we get the full report? Sen, e-mail me pwease? Or anyone who has any information ...

Parched fr Knowledge Guy

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-KB

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30 posted 2002-08-01 07:23 PM


When two are joined as one
in light of day
Within the shine of a sun
for life to stay

When both turn and softly
speak of I do
As others stand quietly
wishing for you two

Best to you Karen,  and your lucky man...

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31 posted 2002-08-01 07:23 PM



I think the
honeys may be
mooning just now, BSQ...

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32 posted 2002-08-01 07:35 PM


A blessing so true
from a Sunshiny gift
Surely will give
ol' Serenity a lift

Much care and thought
you gave in your present
Under a moon, beaming
from sharp yellow crescent

Beautifully done, Sunshine.
You get a major atta-gal for this gorgeous wedding gift!
jeff

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33 posted 2002-08-01 09:12 PM


Oh what a sweet wedding poem. And why do I never know what's going on around here??
Congrats, sweet Serenity.
Sandra

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34 posted 2002-08-01 11:29 PM


Oops! I should have thought of that, Karilea!

Said if I only could ...
-KB

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35 posted 2002-08-02 12:00 PM


She lost the battle
And had to wear shoes
But did they stay on
After the "I do"s?

LOL... This is beautiful, Sunshine... and I wish the new Mrs. every happiness in the world. *S*

Bridget Shenachie
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36 posted 2002-08-02 01:34 PM


Wish all of the best
and the happiest of love
from all of PiP's rest
to Serenity, so well thought of.

Beautiful poem, Sunshine!

Shenachie

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37 posted 2002-08-02 09:34 PM


smiling...a funny thing happened on the way to the altar...

just kidding. But we DID get the a.o.l. bill right before we left (him wasn't happy)

and yes, I wore SHOES. and stockings. and panties. AND A BRA. and a garter. in August. in NEW ORLEANS. (me wasn't happy) yes people, I wore a dress too...heh heh.

But now? Mrs. Blaise is blissfully barefoot!
and I love ya all, but methinks I'm going back to bed! talk to y'soon! ta ta.

Mark Bohannan
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38 posted 2002-08-02 09:45 PM





  Simplicity
      
Awaken
with memories
  resting in thought
Stretch into
the light
         of this      
day
Love beating
again..........within
this......................morn
as................................if
all..............................can
see..............................the
one..........................and
the.........................all
of..............your
simplicity.

Mark Bohannan  





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39 posted 2002-08-02 09:56 PM



Mark...thank you so very much for adding a beautiful ring to the poem...the finishing touch...our Serene one will be pleased, if and when she ever gets out of the honeymooners room...


[This message has been edited by Sunshine (08-02-2002 09:58 PM).]

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