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D.Lester Young
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since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

0 posted 2002-07-31 04:33 PM


In the gentleness of a drizzle
Your spirit moved into me
Surrounding me in a morning mist
Where the soft pedals of dew
Opens into blossoms of aromatic magnetism

In a peek a boo attitude
The rays of your heart
Warmed the very core of my existence
In a blanket of caresses that sent shivers
Quaking into the morning sun

As the songbirds of love
Send in their special melody
Captivating me within a special charisma
Of my excited emotions
Needing your heart next to mine

Where the merging water beads
Which lubricate our needs into a lotion
That friction steams
In a rainbow that said it all

Paradise exhilarated in tumultuous arousals
Catapulting me into the heavens
On the banks of eternity
In eyes now misting
Needing you closer than forever

Yes my angel
Your wings have imprisoned me
In the spirit of the greatest feeling know to man
Where a murmur of your lips
Sends sighs echoing into my deepest confines

Coming back saying something as simple as
I love you
Sweetheart


D.Lester Young (07/31/02)
Tuscaloosa, AL
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Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
1 posted 2002-07-31 04:36 PM


Oh, this is simply breathtaking!!!  What a beautiful, sensual, and tender write.....I love it.....

Open the door and let your adventure begin!!!
  
    


passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2002-08-05 03:31 AM


mmm, and I thought there weren't any romantics left in the world, (except for Magnus of course)
Samantha G Kennedy
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since 2002-07-27
Posts 131
Kent England
3 posted 2002-08-06 05:59 PM


That friction steams
In a rainbow that said it all
ahhhhhhhh, purrfect!!


Sammie

^i^

suthern
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4 posted 2002-08-08 10:05 AM


I liked this beautiful and romantic work very much. *S*
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