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VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
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0 posted 2002-07-31 04:09 PM


Odd

euphoric day
greets the morn
odd
not much difference
twixt yesterday
and today
save
a few degrees
less sizzle

no drizzle
lots of sunshine
gentle breezes
just as
days ago
in a row

why
euphoria
why
“all’s right
with the world,”
well
my world,

unless I ponder
circumstances,
but
why
get into that?
go ahead,
slip on
euphoria,
I dare ya!

go
ahead
let the day
carry you away
in its invitation’s
play,
okay?

“Okay!”


©July 31, 2002

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

© Copyright 2002 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
Krishankins
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1 posted 2002-07-31 04:14 PM


nicely done!

A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground

passing shadows
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2 posted 2002-08-05 02:59 AM


well put!
Samantha G Kennedy
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Kent England
3 posted 2002-08-06 06:05 PM


VAS  it's good to go with the flow ~ and ou so nicely have here!


this is one to read aloud and let the tongue roll away each word....it has a happy step...i found myself smiling


Good write...love it!!


Sammie

^i^

rwood
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since 2000-02-29
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4 posted 2002-08-07 07:01 AM


Not so odd..uplifting and positive. I like the message in this.

Sincerely,
Reg

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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
5 posted 2002-08-08 12:53 PM


Odd, that you get rain or od that you get sunshine?
                
I love it, Virginia!  Well done, indeed!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Jason
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since 2002-07-31
Posts 72
Macon, GA
6 posted 2002-08-08 12:59 PM


Vas,

fast paced fun, well done
keep it up, for everyone
entertain us all, with another one
or at least I will enjoy your puns

enjoyed it, really
Jason

Practiced in the Art of Perception

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