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jellybeans
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since 2000-10-13
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0 posted 2002-07-31 02:42 PM


come, take hold of an outstretched
hand

let’s dream...

remember
when I used to
love you

remember when I used to
make you laugh

when I used to turn
you
on

we never had forever
we never even
pretended

but oh
how we did
dream

come my friend…
come with me
there

for one last time
before I wake

let’s dream.

[This message has been edited by jellybeans (07-31-2002 02:42 PM).]

© Copyright 2002 jellybeans - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-07-31 02:57 PM


Wonderful

Cold hands means a warm heart

suthern
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2 posted 2002-07-31 03:44 PM


Melancholy memories
From your pen
Make us all wish
For old days again.

This is lovely, jellybeans... wistful and longing... and very well done. *S*

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2002-07-31 03:48 PM



Yes...what suthern says...

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
4 posted 2002-07-31 06:45 PM


jellybeans - to dream what was, to dream what will be. Lovely thoughts of them here...

BC

paladin
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5 posted 2002-07-31 07:52 PM


"I want a dream lover so I do'nt have to dream alone"

paladin

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Canada eh.
6 posted 2002-07-31 07:55 PM


*Smiling at Paladin*
This is a lovely mid summer poem..
Enjoyed so much!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Balladeer
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7 posted 2002-07-31 10:20 PM


...and may we never awake....
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