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Open Poetry #21

At Dawn (Cinquain poem)

Neeraja
Senior Member

since 2002-06-22

Posts 812
The Netherlands

0 posted 2002-07-31 02:01 PM

A memory of darkness

ruins

my daybreak dream

as I awake

at dawn...

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-07-31 02:06 PM

(big hugggssssss) Oh Neeraja, I know ow you feel and my heart goes out to you, sweet friend, I hope stillness soon replaces those nightmares, you deserve the greatest joy so much, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Neeraja, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

2 posted 2002-07-31 04:16 PM

and when the dawn has settled into her dressing gown, the dark will retreat and take it's dreams with it. This poem is very special, and I enjoyed it a lot!

Open the door and let your adventure begin!!!

Neeraja
Senior Member

since 2002-06-22

Posts 812
The Netherlands

3 posted 2002-08-01 05:04 AM

Thanks Noah and thanks Sunnyone... for your sweet reply on my poem!

It means a lot to me!!!

Neeraja

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2002-08-05 03:29 AM

short and sweet, enjoyed it

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

5 posted 2002-08-05 09:00 AM

Neeraja - very powerful write...

BC

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