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SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2002-07-31 01:45 PM


I Told Him

On the edge of tears
Feeling so sick today
From such lack  of sleep
What a price to pay

Stomach all in knots
Head hurting real bad
It was the worst night
For nothing am I glad

It seems like a bad dream
Only I never do wake up
When he is drinking
He never seems to get enough

I can't seem to think today
With so much pain in my head
I am sure my eyes
Must be real red

Coming in so late at night
I told him not to do
Because I would lock him out
This is what I did, too

I listened to the threat he made
I don't take threats very well
He ought to know that by now
But, this morning I feel ill

By Sue 7-31-02



© Copyright 2002 Sue Graves - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-07-31 01:46 PM


Sad so sad

Cold hands means a warm heart

WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
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2 posted 2002-07-31 01:48 PM


This is very sad.  *HuGs*
Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-07-31 09:35 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Sue, this is sooooooo sad, sweet friend, though my heart aches to how he is treating you I am proud of what you did because no one deserves to threaten you and if he can't listen he can't be invited in! (BIG HUGGGSSSSSSS) My heart goes out to you and I pray you can find a whole new relief from this soon, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2002-07-31 10:24 PM


Oh Sue, I am so sorry.
Wish there were something I could say or do.
You hang in there sweetie...email me if you like.
~Hugs~

NewEnglandlazurlu
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since 2002-01-04
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A Mountain Paradise
5 posted 2002-07-31 10:27 PM


Oh Sue - Your life is so difficult at times. Know that there is a lot of hugs and support here for you and if there's anything I can do, please don't hesitate to ask. Bless you sweetie.
Hugs and Prayers too, Marti

"Even if life is full of thorns,
I still embrace it, for I know
that in between those thorns,
there is a rose worth all the pain."

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