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I Heard your Tender Call
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I Heard your Tender Call |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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I heard your Tender Call It resounded in silence, quietly, softly soulfully, skillfully, rejoicing in my heart behind closed eyes I heard soft cry a mind meld of thoughts impart I felt your tender call You were there, so long ago, a heartbeat away in keen memory your words still sway to dance the dance of night’s long song wherein these dreams your thoughts belong Did I dream your tender call Lace strewn veil o'er silent shadows soft holding pleasant gentle of your touch then wing me upward, swift hold me aloft thy tender call is the voice of such I heard your tender call It sang soft, soulful sweet and true as it came from the heart’s heart of you ably it came from behind the refrain that I would hear it, again and again When you tenderly called my name ~*~ Reprised, in Memory, WY... |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Very touching, and soft. Beautifully written! A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunshine - your call is as tender as this poem. Very tender indeed... BC |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Lace strewn veil o'er silent shadows soft holding pleasant gentle of your touch then wing me upward, swift hold me aloft thy tender call is the voice of such What beautiful gentle words, Karilea... you put them together so very skillfully  ~ tender hugsLyra |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Karilea..so gently and tenderly penned. How I wish I had been here at Passions to have known, read, and conversed with this great writer, much revered and gentle man. This is so lovely... ~Hugs~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Just yesterday I found a lovely e-mail that I had kept from Wilfred (Bill) ... yes ... he stays in the memory~ 'Lace strewn veil o'er silent shadows soft holding pleasant gentle of your touch' Very, very pretty thoughts~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"It sang soft, soulful sweet and true as it came from the heart’s heart of you ably it came from behind the refrain that I would hear it, again and again When you tenderly called my name"  (big hugggssssss) Oh Karilea, this is sooooo touching, sweet friend, I too wish I could have been here earlier so I could have known this wonderful person and friend to us all as I have browsed through the archives before and read his passionate gorgeous poetry! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is hertfelt, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiufl heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
If there's a more beautiful way to say that someone is missed, I don't know what it is. *S* And yes... he is. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is just beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
What a dance!!! Neeraja |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
This is an awesome poem....obviously of a poet....who has inspired you...Yeats? or maybe someone else... |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
I loved this softly tender wonderfully emotive poem..Bravo! Poetry is: |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
You had me captivated with thy tender poetic call, Karilea... mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Yes what a caring , loving tender man Bill was ,we chatted and emailed for about three years , his memories remain in my heart , we often shared poems Hope |
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Jason Member
since 2002-07-31
Posts 72Macon, GA |
A heartfelt thought in poetic verse what more can I say, it was beautiful. I look forward to reading more from you Sunshine. I'll be watching...... Jason Practiced in the Art of Perception |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea This expression felt through the thin veil that some times moves with heart sigh, is beauitul.  |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
very nice, I especially like the same stanza as Noah chose! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Joyful melancholy, Karilea. I loved it. Said if I only could ... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms k-lady... you do tender with long gloves on enjoyed it ms |
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