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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2002-07-31 10:56 AM


“TO REMINISCE”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
Only known a few,
before I met you…
None to compare,
which I’m aware…

Beauty seen before,
inside I did ignore…
Yours is different,
both are not absent…

Charming your smile,
not seen for a while…
Gave me your heart,
mine a boost to start…

Loving me somehow,
your being did allow…
Knowing you like this,
no need to reminisce…
~~~~


© Copyright 2002 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
WhiteRose
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1 posted 2002-07-31 10:58 AM


This is lovely. Thank you for the enjoyable read.
Enchantress
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2 posted 2002-07-31 12:05 PM


Wonderful write Bill...romantic and wistful.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Sunshine
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3 posted 2002-07-31 12:06 PM



Nope, no need, just get with it!
You left a smile behind with this one!

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-07-31 12:55 PM




(smiles) This is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, and may you always reflect on all thes weet memories and always look to the present to hold that true love dearly! (big hugggssssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Sunnyone
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5 posted 2002-07-31 04:12 PM


Ah yes...let the memories accumulate, and reminisce later!!  Nice writing here, Bill!

Open the door and let your adventure begin!!!
  
    


Sven
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6 posted 2002-07-31 04:24 PM


every one just gets better BC. . .

love it. . . great work. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
7 posted 2002-07-31 04:24 PM


WhiteRose - and thank you for coming by and the kind reply...

Enchantress - love that romance...

Sunshine - I agree, just get with it. Glad I could make you smile...

Mistletoe Angel - your replies to my writings always touch me...

Sunnyone - nice to see you. Thanks for coming by, I appreciate your kindness very much...

NewEnglandlazurlu
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8 posted 2002-07-31 10:21 PM


BC this is terribly romantic. How sweet you are.  I liked it very much.

Hugs, Marti

"Even if life is full of thorns, I still embrace it for I know that in between those thorns, there is a rose worth all the pain."

JamesMichael
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9 posted 2002-08-01 05:08 AM


Enjoyed...James
Samantha G Kennedy
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10 posted 2002-08-02 02:29 PM


i think cupids arrow ~ struck you !

a great read, beautifully expressed

Sammie

^i^

catalinamoon
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11 posted 2002-08-02 02:36 PM


Nice when this happens. I wish I could say it has happened to me.
Sandra

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12 posted 2002-08-05 03:14 AM


very good Bill. perfect ending!
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