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CSKpoet
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Island in Paradise

0 posted 2002-07-31 02:38 AM





As heavenly music fills the room
we dance across the floor
Do you feel all the love tonight
as our hearts begin to soar?

Dancing across the Heavens
and then dance across Mars
finding a true love between us
dancing underneath the stars

We waltz across the rings of Jupiter
and embrace in love upon it's moons,
sing a song throughout the universe
pure heavenly elated tunes

We search for a star to cling to
for our love to rejuvenate it's glow,
drift on into slumber of rapture
and warmth
in milky way dreams you know

For the cosmos are our playground,
silence of space alive from our sighs
a waltz of rhapsody and ecstasy
as we wave this galaxy good-bye.


CSKpoet with White Eagle

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

© Copyright 2002 Cheryl Stewart Koomoa - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2002-07-31 01:01 PM



Well look what I found...another duet!
I think Passions is throwing some very clever,
very talented people together...

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
2 posted 2002-07-31 01:10 PM


Awesome

Cold hands means a warm heart

suthern
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Louisiana
3 posted 2002-07-31 01:22 PM


This is a beautiful collaboration. *S* Well done!
CSKpoet
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Island in Paradise
4 posted 2002-07-31 02:02 PM


Thanks to everyone for the wonderful feedback. It was such a pleasure to write with Tom

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2002-07-31 09:47 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I LOVE IT, you two make such a beautiful team, this is sooooooo romantic, we all love you both so much! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Tom and Cheryl, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you both!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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Canada eh.
6 posted 2002-07-31 10:15 PM


Oh My!  What a beautiful duet!!
Dance on....

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
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highways, & byways, for now
7 posted 2002-07-31 10:56 PM


CSKpoet - wow, what a lovely romantic write. I like this...

BC

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