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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan 
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Lyra~ I LOVE THIS!!! we are having the same type of storm and the night sjy is just awesome, with its spider lightening and the rolling thunder....very lovely sweet friend....calming hugssss to you.... Lauren~ The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  WOW!!! Oh my gosh, I was in a tornado before too, sweet friend, it is indeed thrilling and exciting, I hope everything is alright in that thunderstorm! (big hugggssssss) This is a powewrful poem that strikes like lightning and swept me off my feet, sweet friend, this is excellent, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lyra, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
It's that season, isn't it, we've had tornadoes touching ground around the island of Montreal more frequently than before.. sensational descriptive write here..hope your safe and sound Turbulent hugs  |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
Morning Munkster! Wowsers.....sounds like you were caught in the eye of the rage and the fury of an annoyed Nature episode. Tornado Alley is a corridor we never want to be caught in. Your powerful descriptions were capture-perfect stares at the awesome display of nature at her worst. ~spinning hugs to Genus Rodentia~ jeff |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Lyra, this is just beautiful. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You've captured the Eye of the Storm very well indeed... and I know what it's like, thinking another is brewing right around the corner... Well done, Chipmunky-Lady... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lyra, Your poem was as delicious as a banana split Must have gained at least a pound. Wonderful write. |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
No tornado but weve had storms If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come? |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lyra You caught the fearful excitement that twirls in air and heart during a storm such as this. Wonderful writing! |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Yikes, I wondered if you'd write about your experiences the other night. At dinner last night I was telling my hubby and daughter about your storm. Neither of them realized that Michigan can get tornadoes. Very frightening. But great writing....Hugs, Marti |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
See, Lyra? Even a tornado won't get the best of you - Your words are its surcease. Nice write, m'friend..  |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
As always, powerful images from a vibrant mind. Enjoyed. ThisDiamond |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lyra~ Now that would scare the bejeebers outta me too~ 'a tempest has come and gone tonight in her violent wake, we still tremble' I do love this phrasing~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You paint a poetic picture of nature that we all fear....Yet, thru your words, it is something bearable to at least think of, if not endure... Hurricane Hugo in '89 was quite enough for me.... |
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Muys Member
since 2002-04-06
Posts 389The Netherlands |
Dear Lyra I have never see a tornado, "alone in a news-paper and on the TV The picture is very nice,but the force from a tornado is fright-full Muys |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Wonderful portrayal of the power and majesty of nature great write much enjoyed. Regards, Olias, |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Yes, I've seen a tornado and it is exactly as you portrayed it with your words. Very nicely done. |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
Strong poem! I've never seen a tornado... well... I saw the movie twister... Neeraja |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
You have me trembling. My dogs hide under the bed. I only wish I could get under there with them! Beautifully descriptive and powerful. Way to close to home. Electra |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You've captured the fury of the storm perfectly in this piece Lyra ... wonderful imagery, much enjoyed! Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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