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Magnus
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0 posted 2002-07-30 05:00 PM


A boundless love of treasure keep
from waters still yet flowing deep
A heart devoted to love for life
through moments hard, in times of strife.

     Do not beg my eyes to roam
     by loss of pleasure in our home
     from careless word tossed to the air.
     Do not beg my eyes go there.

The touch of eyes in passion’s glance.
Not knowing this to be one’s chance.
A kiss bestowed upon one’s face.
A nail in trail of lover’s trace.

     Remember vows, one to the other
     and wish me well as if another
     person stood before your glance
     and perhaps in search we’ll find romance.

Two souls in bond of reckless join
as one does stir within the loin.
A night of share in bliss and sleep.
Soft light to dare, one night to keep.

     My thoughts are there upon the dare
     of what might be, so please, to care
     enough of me to let me leap
     to all I strive, and still, these vows to keep

I shall, I will in vows to you,
refrain from leash or lash anew.
I shall, I will my love, my dear,
quell my words and calm thy fear
  


© Copyright 2002 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
WhiteRose
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1 posted 2002-07-30 05:02 PM


I shall, I will in vows to you,
refrain from leash or lash anew.
I shall, I will my love, my dear,
quell my words and calm thy fear.

*sigh*  Sometimes I've no words. This is one of those times.
  

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2 posted 2002-07-30 05:03 PM


Beautiful, Magnus!

A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground

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3 posted 2002-07-30 05:04 PM


Barry - this is excellent - thanks for inviting me to this wonderful conversation so well presented!  Paul
Magnus
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4 posted 2002-07-30 05:09 PM


I must give credit to a most talented "MUSE"
who assisted me with this writing...

White Rose...thank you for your loss of words...
which says a lot...

Krishankins...thank you very much.

Paul...you are most welcome...thank you...

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5 posted 2002-07-30 05:35 PM




(smiles) Oh Barry, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I think you should be awarded with the Poetic Mastery of Muse! (big hugggsssss) Your devotion to your muse is among the most deepest and golden than any other friend I've known, sweet friend, this is beautiful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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6 posted 2002-07-30 08:34 PM



Interesting write, Magnus...so carefully
are the two thoughts of individuals weaving
together in the hopes of being one, but still...
individually attaining...

well done, Sir...kudos to you and your muse...

paladin
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7 posted 2002-07-30 08:43 PM


Maybe my muse will hang around longer if I sweet talk her.It's woth a try.

paladin

Bill Charles
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8 posted 2002-07-30 09:32 PM


Barry - super write with your muse's helping. Great read...

BC

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9 posted 2002-07-30 09:41 PM


Barry, you and your muse du-et so well together.
YOU know I love this don't ya?
~Hugs to you and your muse~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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10 posted 2002-07-30 09:58 PM


Barry, this sounds like a renewal of marriage vows, kind of.
It's beautiful. I hope understood by your muse.
Sandra

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11 posted 2002-07-30 10:01 PM


Barry and muse

This was beautiful and full of honest feeling...together, the words are right to write.  Very much enjoyed by me...thank yous!

rwood
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12 posted 2002-07-30 10:34 PM


I enjoyed this intertwine of thought..feelings and respect. Very well done.

Sincerely,
Reg

NewEnglandlazurlu
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13 posted 2002-07-30 10:41 PM


Magnus, this was a very touching conversation and I am in awe of the way it is written. Great job.

'...A heart devoted to love for life
through moments hard, in times of strife...'

These words really hit me in my heart.

Hugs, Marti

"Even if life is full of thorns, I still embrace it for I know that in between those thorns, there is a rose worth all the pain."

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