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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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chase me chase me dnuor dna dnuor left and right efil fo elcric eht the park of being thgil fo emit eht running on feet sgniw no gniylf spinning on wheels thgilnus no gniyalp finding on moonlight traeh eht fo sterces hey! what happens if I d?kocuabbleelbbaucok?d ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. [This message has been edited by Sven (07-30-2002 04:35 PM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
LMAO Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Typing on peyote! I've done that before too...and it wasn't nearly as great as this, but I've always been able to read backwards...have to when balancing my check book! See ya...gareotemsti [This message has been edited by Toerag (07-30-2002 05:26 PM).] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You're messing with my poor blonde brain! LOL But it was worth the effort... tilted head, crossed eyes and all. *G* |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Well, Sven, I had no trouble reading the poem, but alas, for me, the title is another thing. Totally enjoyed the poem and the challenge to read it. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
this is very well done thanks for the fun I am just knowing I will meet myself coming and going - Liked this Paul |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
!siht evol I !revelc os era uoY ~sguH~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sven....you have to be a certifiable NUT!!!!! This is cute.... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 !wow siht si emosewa, teews dneirf, I tsuj evol ruoy euqinu elyts fo ruoy sdrow! (gib sssssssguh!) Siht si a revelc niarb-relbbub, teews dneirf, ew lla evol uoy os hcum! Uoy evah hcus a lufituaeb traeh, teews dneirf, knaht uoy rof gnirahs! Yam evol dna thgil syawla enihs nopu uoy! Evol, Haon NotaE  "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
This poem was so great I read it twice forwards and backwards. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Umm.... *thinks* How to make it better? I love it as it is! It's wonderful. Yes, that's some sugar for you, but I'm sorry, this piece was origonal, and splendid.  Sincerely, Titus "They say that a hero can save us. I'm not gonna stand here and wait..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sven...just me again... I think I have the title... ---------------------- What happens if I... "doubleback" My brain feels as though it's fried!! LOL...Good stuff! ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sven - my friend, my dneirf, me brain is hacalostic, my thoughts in turbolaclarious. Me head is gimmiws... BC |
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Alicia Member
since 2002-03-22
Posts 279 |
~Oh,...such a tired head right now and I find this. Was worth it. *Peace you. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Sven ~ This is such a hoot and I got a good chuckle out of it. Now where is my mirror? itraM, sguh "Even if life is full of thorns, I still embrace it for I know that in between those thorns, there is a rose worth all the pain." |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
lol. . .  . . . glad that I could get all of your minds working for this one. . . yes, it's an experiment with forward and backward lines. . . read the first line left to right, the next line right to left, and so on down the poem. . . hmmmmmmm. . . I'm wondering just how many other directions I can take your eyes and minds. . . *insert evil laugh here* ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Aack, are you trying to finish me off?? The mind is a fragile thing..... Sandra |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Fun read. Thanks Sven! Shenachie |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Leave it to you, to be this clever.... hugssss Sven....always a pleasureLauren~ The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
this is you know who and of course so you |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
You tryin' to give me headache Sven? Kiddin' - this is very cute! Cor |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Said if I only could ... |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
tsuj oot hcum NUF!!! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 you did it.It's bad enough already that I'm blonde...and then you rub it in. Silly man. You are loved. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
hmmmmmmmmm. . . I'm wondering if I should post warnings for the "hair colored impaired" (blondes) among you. . . what can I say people?? I listen to the voices in my head sometimes. . . and they have some really far out ideas about poetry and words. . . so, sit back and enjoy the ride. . . because there are times where I just like to make the words dance and weave. . .  ----------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
hmm...haven't read this one yet..haven't commented it on it. I think I have a headache now, but it was worth it. This is you as always. Luckily I'm not so confused as others, eh?   Back to the top because I see you don't get here as often as you used to. I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement. |
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