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HeartSender
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since 2002-07-29
Posts 5
Virginia, USA

0 posted 2002-07-30 02:29 PM



You say you love me
This I do know
But it is your fear and mistrust
That tends to always show

Young lady hear me
As time passes us by
That love, in my eyes
Should never make you cry

I have been abandoned
By youth and petty games
So if you want my love
Try to put others love to shame

In the distance
Feel what my love has to give
And just once in your life
Open your Heart and try to live

I offer a life
Full of no tears,
Trust, love, and happiness
That will last through the years

From the moment we met
I knew you were to be mine
But you constantly test my love
Time after time

I am asking you now
To bring your Heart near
And love me and trust me
Without fear

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© Copyright 2002 HeartSender - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-07-30 02:43 PM


Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
2 posted 2002-07-30 02:52 PM


Very very romantic...enjoyed so much!
I think she should listen and trust you.
~Summer Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace
3 posted 2002-07-30 04:13 PM


for someone who has lost trust...it is hard for them to do it again...sweet poem tho...hope she hears...helen
Mistletoe Angel
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since 2000-12-17
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4 posted 2002-07-30 07:12 PM




(sigh) I too hope that in time she will reach out to you with heart and give you trust, sweet friend, I know how you feel and I wish the best for you both, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
5 posted 2002-07-31 01:14 AM


T'would be nice but for some, those hearts are encased in steel and cannot feel.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Samantha G Kennedy
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since 2002-07-27
Posts 131
Kent England
6 posted 2002-08-01 06:57 PM


Ahhhhhhhhhh, beautiful....

Sammie

^i^

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