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Krawdad
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0 posted 2002-07-30 10:22 AM




               to my left
               half moon rising
               in gold     horizon
               along this pink road
               to nowhere
                    yes      pink I said
                    a metamorphosed stone
                    crushed

               in the climbing     sky
                    passing behind red lights flashing
                    towering information     warning
               half fades to green
                    and will not reach zenith
                    nor milky white
               before I find you
               not there     somehow
               at nowhere
    
      
    
    
                    © 073002

"Grab a pen, grab some paper, do yourself a little favor."    e

© Copyright 2002 Krawdad - All Rights Reserved
ctowen
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since 2001-10-18
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Green Mountains of VT
1 posted 2002-07-30 10:43 AM


And somehow you make it sound it is so write ....

a vision unspared sir ....

Well done!

Martie
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California
2 posted 2002-07-30 10:57 AM


Krawdad

With just a few words you set the scene...then left me feeling lonely.  Very emotive poem.

1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
3 posted 2002-07-30 12:44 PM


vivid sight
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
4 posted 2002-07-30 12:56 PM


Krawdad
Symbols within symbols, enjoyed.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2002-07-30 01:34 PM


An enjoyable read which left me speechless.
I'm keeping this to ponder, again...and yet again.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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