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Warm White Sand |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Warm White Sand The sun crept o’er the nights gray land And bleached it to a warm white sand. Touched by waves of lap and laugh Each turns of wave an epigraph. Sanctity of nudity Rarity of chastity Moments of eternal course Whispers of forever’s force And I am blessed this moments grace This ennui that rules this place With naught to do but write in rhyme And wile away the fretted time. I don’t know what has gifted me This sail upon a white sand sea. A place that wears a face benign A place that suits my nature fine But soon I’ll fly this genie’s air Back once more to mundane fare. |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Yes you are blessed. Seize the moment, savor the morn. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
well, I, for one am glad you grace these pages with your rhyme.  M |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh how I love to look at the sand and sea through your eyes Sy! Very beautifully penned poet sir! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ You are just WONDERFUL ! I love the thought of playing in the sandbox with you~ Come September we will remember Love poetry written in the warm white sand~ Now ya' got me singing Pat Boone's 'Love Letters In The Sand' ...  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
if ennui has caused you to write of white sand and sea...then you are blessed Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The sun crept over the nights gray land And bleached it to a warm white sand. Touched by waves of lap and laugh Each turns of wave an epigraph. Sanctity of nudity Rarity of chastity =============================== And I am blessed this moments grace This ennui that rules this place With naught to do but write in rhyme And wile away the fretted time. ======================================== A place that wears a face benign A place that suits my nature fine But soon I'll fly this genie's air Back once more to mundane fare. ================================ Sy-babes...mundane is me middle name *L* but I escape each day in the words you say. I love the humilty and pure pleasure found in these words...I can see you sitting there just enjoying the beauty around you in a quiet respectful awe. Each turns of wave an epigraph. A place that wears a face benign But soon I'll fly this genie's air Back once more to mundane fare. those will be my COOL CAT lines for the day.  Beautiful imagery Stinkylove...thank you for taking me to your beaches of understand.... I do so enjoy walking barefoot in your mind's poetic sand.  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sy...what the entourage has said, dittoed.... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy What sunshine said...and  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
RSWells, Yes, all of that, thank you. Maureen, Thank you dear. Enchantress, Hugs back dear. Marge, Thank you sweet. VAS, It's all in the way you look at it. JM, I would have no one else walk bare foot through my mind. WWRS Sunshine, Love you too. Martie, And back. |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Seymour I’m too often away from home to get the chance to reply to my favourites as often as I’d like. You have to know you are one of my prime favourites, and this is superb writing. You can carry me off with you to the isle of wile. Walk with me in the stream of dream and we can, like Puff frolic in the autumn mists. Truly one of your best I like this a lot. Tell mum the prettier one has supplanted her as the sultans favourite As always Krissy  And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Krissy |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you know this one caught my eye. Pensacola beaches, warm white sand, and loving life as it is today! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing shadows Your right about Pensacola beaches I've been there. Thanks for the read. |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Seymour, I think you have just describe our North Carolina beaches.This gave me such a serene feeling.I throughly enjoyed it.  Juanita |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
N orth Carolina Girl That was the idea of the poem, thank you. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Seymour, this is sooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I have been blessed to see the ocean plenty of times on vacation despite living near the middle of the country, and I always feel such that wonder you do here! (big huggssssss) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
And I am blessed this moments grace This ennui that rules this place With naught to do but write in rhyme And wile away the fretted time. I really enjoyed this one, Sy...and I must confess that it made me a bit jealous too. to slow this hectic pace, I live to find amongst my hours, some time to fret away and write some rhyme...  ~ hugs to a superb master of rhymeLyra |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I'll just tag along with Sunshine and Martie. *G* Your very own daisy chain? LOL You take us all away from the mundane for a while with such excellent writing, Seymour. *S* |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
I was drawn by the title, but satisfied by the words, great write. Thank you. Regards, Olias. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Simply Beautiful.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you friend Noah. Lyra, Hugs back to a super lady. Thank you sweet Suthern. Olias, Thank you for the read and reply. White Rose, Simply thank you. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Now that I'm the lady of leisure with not much to do, can I come play in the sand and wile away the hours with you. (I'm not sure what my hubby will think of this idea! Oh my!!! Perhaps I can pick up some superb poetry writing tips from you!This is just magnificent. I enjoyed it so much. Hugs Marti "Even if life is full of thorns, I still embrace it for I know that in between those thorns, there is a rose worth all the pain." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marti, It would be a harmless wile. Thanks for the read and comment. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Loved it...fun..exhilarating...makes me want to take a year off..Sand has such..memorable effects.. Sincerely, Reg |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
rwood, You are a dear. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Seymour - I don't know how I kept missing this one, but now I'm glad I stopped for a read. This is prime... BC |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
BC, A prime reply, thank you. |
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