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something to say |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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a friend asked "say, what do you do when you are all by yourself sitting amongst blocks – furniture, old and new, in your 4 by 3 room with the curtains drawn all by yourself? what do you do?" and I had nothing to say my voice seemed to suffer a stiflingly silent moment so I thought hard as I sometimes do in between of so many long moments of NOT thinking soon all my thoughts began to settle like fresh coffee soon I had so much to say so many tunes to hum so many lines to sing and each one was filled with happy moments those little happening ones as I celebrate memories of you in snapshots of your smiles yes, that’s what I do when I am all by myself sitting, staring at the floor when ginger streaks of light disturb the dark, settled air of my 4 by 3 room cutting through the binds of long curtains yes, I think of YOU in scenes of happy recollect |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Sudhir....You still have the touch my dear friend....I love this ending... "yes, that’s what I do when I am all by myself sitting, staring at the floor when ginger streaks of light disturb the dark, settled air of my 4 by 3 room cutting through the binds of long curtains yes, I think of YOU in scenes of happy recollect" Nice touch and love the wordsmithing you applied in this! Excellent!! I must think of some other question to ask you...... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thank you very much, my dear friend... Regards, sudhir |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
now this is a picture my friend. . . such wonderful expression and totally amazing writing. . . it needs to be seen more. . .yes. . . one of your best. . .  -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesome work Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Sudhir - this is very well done - I enjoyed the read a lot - Paul |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I too love to spend many hours out in my garden or in my room at night just dreaming of my muse Joanna! (big huggsssss) This is lovely, sweet friend, I just love your style, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sudhir, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sudhir, Well done my friend, enjoyed the read. |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Very touching piece. Nicely done! A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sudhir Iyer - very thought provoking, and well done... Much was said in this writing... BC |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thank you all my dear friends... so very much... Regards, sudhir |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes, I know it well. Very well done! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Happy recollecting to you, your words brought some thoughts into my mind that I must now explore in happy recollect. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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