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Siofra
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State of Suspended Passion

0 posted 2002-07-30 04:42 AM


let her have her wish
then your heart can wash away in all the tears
and the coldness that grips your voice
can take over the warmth of what was once you.
How many more times can she try to blow out the flame that is you
before you finally burn brighter than all the protests?
You can't ignore this
no click in my ear can silence my words.
I'm not like the rest who say they're not like the rest
and I'm waiting.
Will you come to me?

"My ears have not yet drunk a hundred words
Of that tongue’s uttering, yet I know the sound:" "Romeo and Juliet"

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ethome
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1 posted 2002-07-30 05:17 AM


Sounds like such a painful wait. You have described the background succinctly but with so much said.......I hope your wait is successful.....Nice writing!
Moonlight Romeo
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The heart of you
2 posted 2002-07-30 01:28 PM


I have heard that click before.  

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Auguste
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3 posted 2002-07-30 03:36 PM


To the top!
the_loner_23
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4 posted 2002-07-30 03:37 PM


Cool

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2002-07-30 06:39 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Siofra, my heart goes out to you, sweet friend, my thoughts are with you and I hope soon the flame burns brightly for you, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Siofra, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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6 posted 2002-07-31 04:54 PM


it doesn't seem like a shattering here. . . more like just a chip. . .

powerfully done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

paladin
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7 posted 2002-07-31 05:12 PM


Nothing is more painful than love not returned.

paladin

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