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Open Poetry #21

Angelic Lullaby

CSKpoet
Senior Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 845
Island in Paradise

0 posted 2002-07-30 12:43 PM

Sweet tunes upon breezes
to the shores of my ears
High and low, mesmerizing
on the tides of glow moon
Lullaby wave upon waves
of angelic warm breath
Cherished persuasions
of softest ripples of rhyme
Golden songs of your heart
carried from ocean’s depth
Swelling momentum,
now surges, sky high,
Tantalizing tickle
of sweet heavenly chords
Angelic love beams
light stars in my eyes
Ethereal verses of love song
reaches my heart
Angelic lullaby,
how I treasure each word!

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2002-07-30 05:22 AM

Lots of metaphoric beauty in this piece..... I like this line...

"Cherished persuasions
of softest ripples of rhyme"

Nicely done!

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2002-07-30 10:26 AM

KoKo~
Sweet, sweet, sweet ...
and I'm voting with ET on this one ...

'Cherished persuasions
of softest ripples of rhyme'

Delicately lovely~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

CSKpoet
Senior Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 845
Island in Paradise

3 posted 2002-07-30 02:35 PM

Thank you ET and Marge for your lovely feedback
big hugs to you as well, Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

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