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Magnus
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0 posted 2002-07-29 10:18 PM


Your eyes...
moist trembling lips...
Saying yes, no, maybe.
So unsure.

Our hearts racing
as cheeks flush, nostrils flare and
bodies quiver

Holding you.
The unspoken answer of
“the right time,
and place.”

I love you...
Love you enough to wait for
your eyes to say yes....

Until then I...
will hold you and admire
the beauty of you...
of your eyes....

As my eyes gently
say to you .....I understand...



© Copyright 2002 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-07-29 10:22 PM


How sweet

Cold hands means a warm heart

devina
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2 posted 2002-07-29 10:25 PM


Yep, you are definantly a *keeper* Barry...

with a soul like yours? *swoon*

enjoyed this!!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



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3 posted 2002-07-29 10:28 PM


Ohmygosh!!  This is SO romantic Barry!
HUGE ole sighs coming out of Canada tonight!
~summer night hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-07-29 11:29 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I believe all the true pleasures of love are secretly reflected in the tears lovers share and I know together your tears you share will always express so much and your love will only grow every day with her! (big hugggsssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is breathtaking, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Sunshine
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5 posted 2002-07-30 11:40 AM



The eyes have it...

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2002-07-30 11:52 AM


Magnus,
Very romantic, enjoyed the read.

nakdthoughts
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7 posted 2002-07-30 12:24 PM


if only....
~smiling~ at such a sensitive moment
M

Sven
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8 posted 2002-07-30 04:36 PM


hey. . . you mind if I take notes Magnus??

great work. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

WhiteRose
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9 posted 2002-07-30 04:40 PM


We all long to look into the eyes of another and find understanding there. I enjoyed the very soft images in this poem.
Kethry
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10 posted 2002-07-30 05:48 PM


Magnus,
loved you sensitive eyeful. The only time I ever looked that deeply into another's eyes I fell asleep - but then he was a hypnotist.
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



ThisDiamond
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11 posted 2002-07-30 10:07 PM


Hey! How'ld I miss this one?  Now, how could any woman not appreciate a man like this?
Sensitive and gallant. ThisDiamond

paladin
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12 posted 2002-07-30 10:10 PM


The eyes are the windows of the soul.

paladin

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