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Where Am I?
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Where Am I? |
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oh2beme Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 215NV USA 
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Where Am I? Do you see me standing by your side? Can you feel me in your heart abide? Do you really know how much I care? Do you feel me with you everywhere? Everywhere you go, I am there… Hoping you feel my love and care… I am patient as by your side I wait… Hoping that someday you’ll not hesitate… That in your heart you’ll know it is true… My feelings are real, and how I love you… My patience grows thin, I long for the day… The insecurities and fears will go away… In your heart you will feel my warm embrace… It will warm your heart and add a smile to your face… You will feel the love my heart has to share… You will know the burdens aren’t too much to bear… You’ll crave the commitment as to like a meal… As you find love with yourself and your heart can heal… You will long to share your life with another… Giving of yourself as one to the other… Life is a gift and would be so grand… If only you would reach out to the hand… The hand that waits for you in the wings… To lighten your load and allow your heart to sing… This is how your life could be, if only you’d let go… I’ve seen it in my dreams and the Lord has told me so… He too has made big plans for you, but trod his path you must… Let yourself give freely, and in him place your trust… |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Very good Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Amen!!! Yes, He has trust in every single one of us and He will show us all the way just as long as we ask and open our hearts to the love that encumbers us all! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is a gorgeous blessing, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Debbie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
My best wishes for this romance. Joyce |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
you are here. . . * great work Debbie. . . nice to see you back. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
Is'nt it wonderful.God believes in us even if we choose not to believe in him. paladin |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
oh2beme - good to see you again. Nice write... BC |
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CAVECANEM Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 43Nevada USA |
good to see you are at it again...... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
some really good lines and rhymes! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
oh2beme Good color, enjoyed the read. |
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