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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“SAVING CHANGES” by Bill Charles ~~~~ Graceful you walk by my side, emotions inside me not to hide… Warmth of your hand to know, been a while now, from ago… Seen you mend, only been a while, innocence of your charming smile… Deeper reflections in my mind, perhaps this too, you’ve realigned… Tears from your eyes flow less, you’re too gentle, to be in distress… Love you show me, open, complete, sparkle in your eyes, upbeat… Your spirit I’ve seen you alter, fragile heart mending, stronger… My being smiles, flourishes, observing you saving changes… ~~~~ |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautifully romantic as always Bill ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
reading you is like sitting next to a roaring fire...helen |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is a story with a happy ending, my favorite kind. You do this well. Sandra |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big huggsssssss) Oh Bill, this is sooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I too find when tears fall from a lovers eyes to be the most beautiful sight of all to share compassion and hope to one another! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, you have a loving heart of gold, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Samantha G Kennedy Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 131Kent England |
this reads gently ~ a beautiful sharing Sammie ^i^ |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
great romance - wonderful poetry - a pleasure to read - Paul |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
the_loner_23 - thank you... Enchantress - appreciate your words, as always... 1slick_lady - a fire is like the heart, warm to the touch is one, warm to another is the other... catalinamoon - I'm liking the happy ones more and more... Mistletoe Angel - thank you Noah, for all of your kindness since I've known you. You're the best... Samantha G Kennedy - thank you for coming by, and for your gentle words... Goodknight - your words are most gracious, thank you... |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Bill, this is so beautiful. |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
...oh so tenderly beautiful... mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
I just love your warm heart Bill!!! this reminded me of that country song...what was the title?? "Girl, he ain't worth missin oh- we should be kissin... stop all this foolish wishin don't you know he ain't worth missin..." damn..forgot the title...I'll get back to this...now I've gotta think bout it or I'll go simply nuts... grins... anyhow..enjoyed this!!! ~D Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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