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(Sur) 'Real Life?' |
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Wonderbadger New Member
since 2002-07-29
Posts 3 |
I wake up in the morning and realise I’m dead I look into the mirror and see I have no head But then I think ‘what’s happening?’ With no head I couldn’t see Then again I couldn’t think, So how could all this be? I go on out into the street and everything’s OK But some things are slightly strange about this bright new day The sky is green, the grass is blue, the flowers sing Rolf Harris tunes The birds are riding motorbikes that run on juice from prunes A dog says ‘Hello good morning’ as he takes his man for a walk The man begins to bark a lot, so the dog to him does talk A cow bounces by along the road riding a pogo stick Some local youths go running round using windows to smash a brick A car goes past along the road being driven by a frog The car does not last long though, ‘twaz squashed by a giant hedgehog I think that I should go lie down, to try and get some sleep But I find it hard to catch 40 winks as I’m counted by sleepless sheep As I settle down and close my eyes, things become clear to me As I drift into unconciousness, into that dream called ‘reality’. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
 Cold hands means a warm heart |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
this: "As I drift into unconciousness, into that dream called ‘reality’." I feel this way ALL too often!!! Enjoyed your first post...WELCOME!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Annie765 New Member
since 2002-07-29
Posts 2 |
About time you were published ! Good one to start with, look forward to seeing abit more of you ! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  BRAVO!!! Wow, this is a very crwative and imagery-loaded debut, sweet friend, fantasy can indeed seem so miraculous yet I feel fantasy can always coincide with reality! I LOVE It, this is a fabulous debut! Wecome to Passions, sweet Wonderbadger, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, we all love you so much, ooohhhhhh...please check your E-mail for a special greeting from all of us here at Passions! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
I like this. The way life is not what we perceive sometimes, and sometimes it just gets plain turned around. Though, I’ve gotta tell ya, that one line the flowers sing Rolf Harris tunes now I’ve got “Tie Me Kangaroo Down Sport” running through my head!!. You do know it’s going to take days to get it out now!! Lol You can never win or lose |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
great poem - some times things seem very different from what they should be and then we often stop to ponder what is reality - well done - welcome to Passions - Paul |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sir...real life... Welcome to Passions! I have a feeling you're going to enjoy yourself around here... Please! Check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea |
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Wonderbadger New Member
since 2002-07-29
Posts 3 |
Thanks for all your words of encouragement... I will post a few more in the near future.... although I am affraid my efforts all tend to be basic rhyming ones... nothing too clever, but they help me to get my thoughts and feelings down on paper  ) although what I was thinking when I wrote this one I am not quite sure hehe[This message has been edited by Wonderbadger (07-30-2002 08:17 AM).] |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
Wellcome to passions.Great "stream of conscience" poem.Looking for more of your posts. paladin |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Wonderbadger, welcome it's nice that you made such a big splash with your stream of subconsciousness. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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