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Neeraja
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0 posted 2002-07-29 03:46 PM




Golden sun in a
clear blue sky
singing birds
humming insects
I can hear
the laughter of
playing children
and a dog’s barking
from far away
I’m watering the plants
on my terrace
they are thirsty…
I look around
breathing in
this Summer picture
but somehow…
the rays of the sun
can’t reach
my shadowed heart
today…



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Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-07-29 03:58 PM



Neeraja, I would try harder to bring some sun to you, but sometimes?
Sometimes we just have to dwell in the quiet
to hear what we need to hear...

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-07-29 04:09 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Neeraja, I'm sorry you don't feel so sunny today, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you but I know with a golden loving heart like yours you wil, see the sun shining everyday to you soon and your heart will be miles of meadows of pretty flowers dancing happily! (kiss on cheek) My thoughts are with you, sweet friend, this is heartfelt, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Neeraja, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

devina
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since 1999-10-28
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Cali
3 posted 2002-07-29 04:11 PM


awww...cheer up hun- enjoy the beauty around you!!!

hugs to you lady!!!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



Neeraja
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since 2002-06-22
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The Netherlands
4 posted 2002-07-29 04:22 PM


You are all so sweet!  But things are not as bad as it seems... smile... shadow can be good too sometimes... But thanks for your support!!!



Neeraja

mycafe
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since 2002-05-23
Posts 584

5 posted 2002-07-29 10:02 PM


Though sad, but very beautifully written, Neeraja.

mycafe

Keep counting your blessings

Madame Chipmunk
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6 posted 2002-07-31 02:03 PM


I hope you cheer up, Neeraja...but please remember...
there is so much beauty in shadows.
~ shadowy hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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