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Samantha G Kennedy
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0 posted 2002-07-29 07:42 AM



  




Lower than the moons smile, I shall kiss his sorrow
to stare upon a star, or two, away;
The ground insinuates that I pace forever parched,
it sips my tears perpetually arranged.
On memoirs of a ‘tomorrow’ supper
I’ll call his name to a broken sky,
but he shall apply his  appeasing sleeve
and mop my weathered horizon goodbye.

The syrupy breath of twilight will loiter,
and elevated grasses shall crave with a whispered moan.
A rebelling blaze in my breast will glimmer
guiding him further, a signpost to home:
The terrain will emit Daises, a formation of white
that reflect and swell my perception this night.


Oh! I shall soak in the Jasmine that grapples my pane
an aroma, inducing, a ridding of shame,
yet while the dawn kisses tenderly, my thoughts to the day
he will fade on Golden pastures, my outline in grey;
His eyes, penetrating mistreated membranes, imprinting my substance
and through earths powder, I shall collapse, without much resistance.


I will link my imaginings and tie him to elation
composing oaths of deep-seated love, for my soul is his creation;
I awoke on disguised pledges, and I drove them all about
an anthology of scar tissue, tossed and hurled out-
My Poet sings unmoving, to a hushed, but hungry sphere
And my colours fall fading, a  pastel pause tear.

S-G-K


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1 posted 2002-07-29 08:17 AM


beautiful...and what a vivid imagination, and creativity you have! I love this, every line of it!
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2 posted 2002-07-29 02:21 PM




(smiles) Oh Sam, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, your words always hold such a meaning to them, such as a metamorphosis from sorrow to something new or a slow reincarnation to that level! (kiss on cheek) I am so happy you're here, sweet sister butterfly, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiufl heart, sweet Samantha, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Janet Marie
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3 posted 2002-07-29 05:14 PM


Oh! I shall soak in the Jasmine that grapples my pane
an aroma, inducing, a ridding of shame,
yet while the dawn kisses tenderly, my thoughts to the day
he will fade on Golden pastures, my outline in grey;
His eyes, penetrating mistreated membranes, imprinting my substance
and through earths powder, I shall collapse, without much resistance.


I will link my imaginings and tie him to elation
composing oaths of deep-seated love, for my soul is his creation;
I awoke on disguised pledges, and I drove them all about
an anthology of scar tissue, tossed and hurled out-
My Poet sings unmoving, to a hushed, but hungry sphere
And my colours fall fading, a  pastel pause tear.
===========================

This is most impressive & stunning writing...
creative, unique and lovely.
Your mastery of vocabulary, cadence and imagery is apparent...this was a pleasure to read aloud... your style in this one reminded me some of one of my faves, Rudy Kipling
Welcome to Poetry Land Samantha...
so nice to meet you. I will have to keep an eye out for your wonderful work.
jm

How she loves me, I dont understand
If time wont change me, perhaps she can
And I feel her trying when were apart
God dont let me break her heart

wranx
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4 posted 2002-07-29 08:40 PM


Smooth, Sammie.
This place (open) is like a high speed escalator. It's all I can do to keep up with my favorite peeps. Forgive if I miss you, occasionaly.


Back to the top, w'ya!
~wranx

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is sometimes, intolerable.      

Bukowski

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5 posted 2002-07-30 04:35 PM


Samantha~
This is exquisitely lovely~
Welcome to Passions ...
I will enjoy reading your breathtaking poetry~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Enchantress
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6 posted 2002-07-30 04:57 PM


Absolutely astounding writing Samantha!
I love this!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

VAS
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7 posted 2002-07-30 05:04 PM


very nice and such a powerful last line!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Goodknight
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8 posted 2002-07-30 05:08 PM


such a powerful poem - so well presented - your writing evokes lots of images and feelings - loved you poem - I will look for more - welcome to Passions - Paul
Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2002-07-30 05:55 PM


Samantha,
I'll have to go along with JM. You have become one of my favorites.

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