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MIdsummerRain
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since 2002-05-19

Posts 175
St. Louis, Missouri

0 posted 2002-07-29 12:26 PM

& I Cried for Hours
Whispering for Rage
& I Danced for Hours
Yearning for Pain

& I was left Speechless
Needing that Fury
& I was left Humbled
Longing for Anguish

& I could not Fathom
The Refreshing Air
& I could not Sense
That Rage, that Fury

& so I Cried for Hours
Whispering for Rage
& so I Danced for Hours
Yearning for Pain

One day Men will look back & say
that I gave birth to the 20th Century

Jack the Ripper ~1888

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2002-07-29 12:37 PM

smiling...sounds like one of my sleepless night...and? the "longing for pain" line? nodding here. Sometimes even the sensation of pain is better than "nothingness." (smiling again--let the examination begin, Dr. Freud?)

truly, tho, I understood this...profoundly.

Zinsser
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since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

2 posted 2002-07-29 01:52 AM

Oh how I ca also relate..... can't feel the pain when you dance but all you want to do is feel the pain but at the same time your sick to death of feeling the pain but the pain is .......

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

3 posted 2002-07-29 10:19 AM

very creative, and beautiful

Samantha G Kennedy
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since 2002-07-27

Posts 131
Kent England

4 posted 2002-07-29 11:32 AM

what hurts us, generally drives us~

you rbeautiful poem totally captivated me, it rings truth in its sadness, but to me, sad can and is, sometimes beautiful

bravo!

Sammie

^i^

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2002-07-29 11:44 AM

MIdsummerRain,
As they say a little rain must fall. Enjoyed

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-07-29 02:28 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Rayne, this is so very sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I understand how you feel but I know with all my heart with a loving golden heart like yours you will find true happiness which will leave you crying in joy! (kiss on cheek) keep believing, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rayne, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

7 posted 2002-07-29 03:10 PM

MidsummerRain

Something, even if it hurts, is better than nothing at all. I enjoyed this expressive poem. Thankyou

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2002-07-29 03:15 PM

Fantastic write!!
Boy can I relate to this!!
Excellent!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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