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ecrivan
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0 posted 2002-07-28 09:47 PM





A shape between the lines so bold
the glamour girls in centerfolds;
all figures in their costumes allure
their shadowy essence remains demure.

Right is the light guiding us to them
don't we as children, seek mother hen?
The shape is what we dare to seek,
our other means are all but weak.

Charcoaled outlines give impact
futher colour adds more fact,
but the shape in black is neat
and challenges other senses to reap.

Against a curtain lit from behind
lies the world of actors in mind;
details so definite you cannot find
in silhouttes, welcome to the blind

© Copyright 2002 Martin Dansky - All Rights Reserved
Krishankins
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1 posted 2002-07-29 01:14 AM


Most interesting write!

A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground

Zinsser
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2 posted 2002-07-29 01:43 AM


very much enjoyed....
ecrivan
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3 posted 2002-07-30 10:53 AM


thankyou Californian friends
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