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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Unmade Beds ~*Marge Tindal*~ Unmade head in unmade bed on satin pillows tossed Sheets of relished remember when counting love-sheep lost~ Baa-baa-baaaaa and boo-hoo-hoo Where the heck is little girl blue ? Seems she's simply gone to sleep in the meadow of quiet weep with undreamed dreams in her unmade head tossing on an unmade bed~ *Oh kids ... I've got no idea~ Can anyone tell I had a sleepless night ? ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl darling heart sister of my soul and writer of dreamers rhymes your thoughts and words in this are exquisite. If this is the result of a sleepless night then sleep no more darling heart, sleep no more. writing I love it utterly utterly utterly. The flow of it is perfect and the style suits the subject perfectly, I love it utterly utterly utterly. Xxxxxxx Bonne nuit   Love and warm stuff As always Slushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Marge, I like the way you did this. Believe me, I know all about sleepless nights. I have alot of those. And, I am so tired. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Unmade head in unmade bed on satin pillows tossed I sympathize totally, Marge... I also have an unmade head right now... ~ hoping all is well with you hugsLyra |
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andEmmamakes3 Member
since 2002-05-11
Posts 66Kent |
Auntie Margie girl this is wonderful your writing is always good this is excellent I love it Emma  Eternity, stands laughing at old time |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
*Thanks everyone ... it's been 'touch n' go' on these sleepless nights~ I'd rather take two poems than two pain killers~ You all are the greatest ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Auntie Margie girl while I have the opportunity to reply I’m going to do so to as many as I can manage. Another stunning write that only YOU could have written, wonderful writing and beautifully presented as always YOU ROCK my favourite aunt of hear. Superb and I love it. As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Krissy~ Thank you, sweetie~ Time for me to get past the pain ... Time to 'make the bed' ... ~  Love ya' gal~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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